COMPLETE The Moon Terror by Albert Birch - kd

[Apophennec]

Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

duration 15:06

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don warren

Just need the intro added; right now it's only "Chapter 2 the dictator of destiny"

03:14-03:17: repeat, "..as the serious declaration..."

03:35: repeat, "...until his- until his message...

I agree; we definatly have some momentum now

[Apophennec]

Chapter three of The Moon Terror

duration 12:59

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don

Section 3 is PL OK

[PeeWeeVO007]

Submitting Chapter 4 of The Moon Terror

Duration 19:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the help.

don

[PeeWeeVO007]

Corrections to Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

The timeline locations are different because of the addition to the beginning.

New duration 15:20

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_02_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the great checking.

don

[Apophennec]

Corrections to Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

The timeline locations are different because of the addition to the beginning.

New duration 15:20

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_02_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the great checking.

don

Perfect; section 2 is PL OK now.

[Apophennec]

Submitting Chapter 4 of The Moon Terror

Duration 19:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the help.

don

Section 4 PL Notes:

00:19: repeat chapter 4
14:10: some sort of a small warp during the word I: "*I* view this affair as a rational human being"

Also Don if you take a look at the M.W I filled out the section titles so they match the text, I thought maybe that'd makes things feel more polished?

- Connor

[PeeWeeVO007]

Chapter 4 corrections

Duration 19:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

not sure what M.W means? You'r speaking of matching chapter titles with text?

You're very good at this. I appreciate working with you. I am fairly new here but having a blast trying.

Thanks
don

[Apophennec]

Chapter 4 corrections

Duration 19:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

not sure what M.W means? You'r speaking of matching chapter titles with text?

You're very good at this. I appreciate working with you. I am fairly new here but having a blast trying.

Thanks
don

Great, chapter 4 is now PL OK

Sorry, it stands for Magic Window, you'll see what I mean under the "Title" column. ie
Chapter IV. Dr. Gresham takes command as opposed to just Chapter 04.

I agree, it gets quite exhilarating once you get the hang of it; once you get it you've got it.

I appreciate you saying that; I haven't been here very long either so working with you is helping me learn as well

[PeeWeeVO007]

Please review Chapter V of The Moon Terror

duration 8:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

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don

[Apophennec]

Please review Chapter V of The Moon Terror

duration 8:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don

Chapter 5 PL Notes:
Just need between .5- 1s silence at the beginning


I found this hilarious:

"embracing the most civilized countries of the globe—the eastern half of the United States and Canada"

...just the eastern half

[PeeWeeVO007]

Adding front-end silence.

duration 8:54.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

I agree with your comment. Some of it does not make modern sense.

Thanks again for your great work

don

[Apophennec]

Adding front-end silence.

duration 8:54.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

I agree with your comment. Some of it does not make modern sense.

Thanks again for your great work

don

...there are some who'd say it still does

This section 5 is now PL OK

[PeeWeeVO007]

Please review Chapter 6 of The Moon Terror

Duration 14:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

As always, thanks for the great help.

don

[Apophennec]

Please review Chapter 6 of The Moon Terror

Duration 14:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

As always, thanks for the great help.

don

Chapter VI PL note:
in the intro: **Chapter 6:** The Coasts of Mystery

06:38: little bit of a "clip" I guess you could say, between observed and above " that had been observed**above the mountains"

07:33: repeat *another*, "But shortly after midnight another portentous event..."

08:13: heard, "The flight *from* the public from the doomed area..." should be *of*

08:58: repeat, "but he said nothing until we were alone"

No problem; I'm glad you're doing some of the Wierd Tales

[PeeWeeVO007]

corrections to chapter 6

Duration 14:02

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

Sorry, I'm getting sloppy

Thanks
don