COMPLETE The Moon Terror by Albert Birch - kd

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Apophennec
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Post by Apophennec »

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 15th, 2024, 10:19 am Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

duration 15:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_02_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don warren
Just need the intro added; right now it's only "Chapter 2 the dictator of destiny"

03:14-03:17: repeat, "..as the serious declaration..."

03:35: repeat, "...until his- until his message...

I agree; we definatly have some momentum now :D
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 15th, 2024, 10:27 am Chapter three of The Moon Terror

duration 12:59

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_03_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don
Section 3 is PL OK
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Submitting Chapter 4 of The Moon Terror

Duration 19:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the help.

don
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Corrections to Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

The timeline locations are different because of the addition to the beginning.

New duration 15:20

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_02_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the great checking.

don
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Post by Apophennec »

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 15th, 2024, 5:47 pm Corrections to Chapter 2 of The Moon Terror

The timeline locations are different because of the addition to the beginning.

New duration 15:20

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_02_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for the great checking.

don
Perfect; section 2 is PL OK now.
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
Apophennec
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PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 15th, 2024, 3:59 pm Submitting Chapter 4 of The Moon Terror

Duration 19:31

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks for all the help.

don
Section 4 PL Notes:

00:19: repeat chapter 4
14:10: some sort of a small warp during the word I: "*I* view this affair as a rational human being"

Also Don if you take a look at the M.W I filled out the section titles so they match the text, I thought maybe that'd makes things feel more polished?

- Connor
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Chapter 4 corrections

Duration 19:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

not sure what M.W means? You'r speaking of matching chapter titles with text?

You're very good at this. I appreciate working with you. I am fairly new here but having a blast trying.

Thanks
don
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PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 16th, 2024, 9:25 am Chapter 4 corrections

Duration 19:30

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_04_birch_128kb.mp3

not sure what M.W means? You'r speaking of matching chapter titles with text?

You're very good at this. I appreciate working with you. I am fairly new here but having a blast trying.

Thanks
don
Great, chapter 4 is now PL OK :birthday:

Sorry, it stands for Magic Window, you'll see what I mean under the "Title" column. ie
Chapter IV. Dr. Gresham takes command as opposed to just Chapter 04.

I agree, it gets quite exhilarating once you get the hang of it; once you get it you've got it.

I appreciate you saying that; I haven't been here very long either so working with you is helping me learn as well :D
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Please review Chapter V of The Moon Terror

duration 8:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don
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Post by Apophennec »

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 16th, 2024, 4:27 pm Please review Chapter V of The Moon Terror

duration 8:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

Thanks

don

Chapter 5 PL Notes:
Just need between .5- 1s silence at the beginning


I found this hilarious:

"embracing the most civilized countries of the globe—the eastern half of the United States and Canada"

...just the eastern half :lol:
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Adding front-end silence.

duration 8:54.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

I agree with your comment. Some of it does not make modern sense.

Thanks again for your great work

don
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Post by Apophennec »

PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 17th, 2024, 10:15 am Adding front-end silence.

duration 8:54.5

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_05_birch_128kb.mp3

I agree with your comment. Some of it does not make modern sense.

Thanks again for your great work

don
...there are some who'd say it still does ;) :wink:

This section 5 is now PL OK
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

Please review Chapter 6 of The Moon Terror

Duration 14:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

As always, thanks for the great help.

don
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PeeWeeVO007 wrote: May 18th, 2024, 3:54 pm Please review Chapter 6 of The Moon Terror

Duration 14:06

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

As always, thanks for the great help.

don
Chapter VI PL note:
in the intro: **Chapter 6:** The Coasts of Mystery

06:38: little bit of a "clip" I guess you could say, between observed and above " that had been observed**above the mountains"

07:33: repeat *another*, "But shortly after midnight another portentous event..."

08:13: heard, "The flight *from* the public from the doomed area..." should be *of*

08:58: repeat, "but he said nothing until we were alone"

No problem; I'm glad you're doing some of the Wierd Tales :D
"She Died. I was saved." - No Longer Human, Osamu Dazai
"...when you have come to babylon you will remain there for many years, for a long time...after that I will bring you away from there in peace..."
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Post by PeeWeeVO007 »

corrections to chapter 6

Duration 14:02

https://librivox.org/uploads/kilteddragon/moonterror_06_birch_128kb.mp3

Sorry, I'm getting sloppy

Thanks
don
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