~(Editing) [DR] The Third Violet by Stephen Crane - thw

[DrSpoke]

Hello,

Mrs Truscot. Please let me know of any issues.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_12.mp3
01:00

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_15.mp3
00:59

[ChuckW]

Hello,

Mrs Truscot. Please let me know of any issues.

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_12.mp3
01:00

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_15.mp3
00:59

Thank you! Great job, as always! Chapter 15 is PL OK, but Chapter 12 has some missing lines:

0:08 - “You see,” she said to the others, “it is as I said. He has come back.”

1:00 - “Oh, yes, my dear, he’s a good tennis player.”

[ChuckW]

More of Hollanden:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_07.mp3 01:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_09.mp3 04:13
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_12.mp3 00:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_13.mp3 00:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_14.mp3 00:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_15.mp3 01:27

Note that I've recorded an extra line in Chapter 9 (page 1, paragraph 7) as I think it belongs to Hollanden rather than Hawker.

I've assumed a short O for Oglethorpe rather than a long one. If you want the other, let me know and I can re-do.

Thanks for catching that. I've corrected the document, so Greg won't accidentally re-record your line.

I'll PL this sometime today. Thanks again!

[DrSpoke]

Chapter 12 has some missing lines:

0:08 - “You see,” she said to the others, “it is as I said. He has come back.”

1:00 - “Oh, yes, my dear, he’s a good tennis player.”

Sorry about that! Alpha Gossiper asks for a second chance:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_12.mp3
01:18

and to be forgiven I'll throw in something else. Not claimed and possibly wrong:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_nursemaid_1.mp3
00:14

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_extras_9.mp3
00:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_extras_26.mp3
00:50

Thank you!

[LCaulkins]

I can do Mother Hawker for you

[ChuckW]

Chapter 12 has some missing lines:

0:08 - “You see,” she said to the others, “it is as I said. He has come back.”

1:00 - “Oh, yes, my dear, he’s a good tennis player.”

Sorry about that! Alpha Gossiper asks for a second chance:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_mrstruscot_12.mp3
01:18

and to be forgiven I'll throw in something else. Not claimed and possibly wrong:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_nursemaid_1.mp3
00:14

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_extras_9.mp3
00:54

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_extras_26.mp3
00:50

Thank you!

Aaaaw, bless you! Thank you so much. And with all these different line readings, I think I can go ahead and just say those extra lines are done. I appreciate the help!

[ChuckW]

I can do Mother Hawker for you

That would be super! Thank you!

[DrSpoke]

I appreciate the help!

You're very welcome. I did really appreciate all your thoughtful work - colour-coding and descriptions - to make my browsing of characters easier!

[norahnelson]

Hi,
May I read Mary, the younger Hawker sister?

Thanks, Norah

[Salvationist]

Here's Mr. Oglethorpe:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_oglethorpe_17.mp3 38 seconds

May I also read the Cashier?

[ChuckW]

More of Hollanden:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_07.mp3 01:40
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_09.mp3 04:13
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_12.mp3 00:14
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_13.mp3 00:57
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_14.mp3 00:33
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_hollanden_15.mp3 01:27

Note that I've recorded an extra line in Chapter 9 (page 1, paragraph 7) as I think it belongs to Hollanden rather than Hawker.

I've assumed a short O for Oglethorpe rather than a long one. If you want the other, let me know and I can re-do.

Thanks for catching that. I've corrected the document, so Greg won't accidentally re-record your line.

I'll PL this sometime today. Thanks again!

PL OK! Thanks again!

[ChuckW]

Here's Mr. Oglethorpe:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_oglethorpe_17.mp3 38 seconds

May I also read the Cashier?

PL OK... and absolutely! Thank you so much!

[ChuckW]

Hi,
May I read Mary, the younger Hawker sister?

Thanks, Norah

Absolutely! Thank you!

[Newgatenovelist]

It's been a while since I was on the drama forum, so please do say if I'm doing this back to front: in the available small roles, there are 2, 3, 4 and 5 gossipers, currently numbers 38-41 in the MW. I don't see #1 (highlighted in yellow in the script for chapter 12), either in the available or claimed sections. Could I just check that that's the case? If that part has inadvertently been dropped and does need filling, I'm happy to pick it up.
Erin

[karmaemmings]

May I read for Great Grief? Or must the reader be male?