[COMPLETE] Discovery & Exploration of the Mississippi Valley-tg
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I had to look at your section text to get context to your question. If it were me, I'd say the parenthetical words in a somewhat offhand voice, if possible. Or just use a very brief pause (about enough for a breath) to separate it from the main text. Just do what you can.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
PL for 13 finished - excellent.
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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Thanks!
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Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
PL of section 14 very good. There is one minor edit needed. In the first paragraph of the reading in the 9th line from the text p 166, "French and Iroquois" should read "English and Iroquois". Otherwise excellent.
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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Thanks again! I hope to get to this tomorrow.
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America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Section 14 fixed. The fix occurs around 1:12.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
well done - very nice. PL AOK
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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Thanks very much!
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America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
section 19 is ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3
32m40s
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3
32m40s
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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Thank you!
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Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
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Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
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Section 19:
25:41 - "composed of... more than a hundred" - long pause in this sentence
25:41 - "composed of... more than a hundred" - long pause in this sentence
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
ok - i'll tidy up. is that it?
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
Ambrose Bierce (1842 - 1914)
Ambrose Bierce (1842 - 1914)
I've made the edit and also went through and cleaned up a few other minor pauses.
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3
32m35s
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/mississippivalley_19_shea_128kb.mp3
32m35s
"War is God's way of teaching Americans geography."
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PL OK.
Next time you clean up more than what's requested, would you please post the times of the other edits? I'm trusting you didn't accidentally cut off part of a word or something; I don't want to listen to the whole thing again to be sure.
Next time you clean up more than what's requested, would you please post the times of the other edits? I'm trusting you didn't accidentally cut off part of a word or something; I don't want to listen to the whole thing again to be sure.
School fiction: David Blaize
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart
America Exploration: The First Four Voyages of Amerigo Vespucci
Serial novel: The Wandering Jew
Medieval England meets Civil War Americans: Centuries Apart