Here are my edits with time stamps.Below is a list of the misreads that need correction. When you do your editing, PLEASE GIVE ME THE TIMING OF ALL YOUR CORRECTIONS. PROVIDING ME WITH THE TIMING OF THE EDITS IS A MUST! THANK YOU FOR COMPLYING WITH MY REQUEST.
4:51.5 Text reads: "Then why in this city of Athens, in which men of merit are always being sought after, is he not at once appointed a general?" You said:
"This is why in the city of Athens..."
6:15.5 Text reads "Sense or passion are too much for the 'dry light' of intelligence which mingles with them and becomes discoloured by them."
You said "Sense or purpose..."
6:27 Text reads "The concentration of the mind on a single object, or on a single aspect of human nature, overpowers the orderly perception of the whole."
You said The concentration of the mind on a single subject..."
7:34.0 and again at 7:56 and 8:03. Please check the pronunciation of the word "sophist," which occurs 3 times in in this paragraph. First textural occurrence reads: "In the Protagoras the ancient poets are recognized by Protagoras himself as the original sophists..."
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15.40.5 Text reads: Socrates: "And if you knew the good speaker, you would also know the inferior speakers to be inferior." You said "...to the inferior."
29:10 Text reads: Socrates: "Surely not about things in Homer of which you have no knowledge." You said: "Surely not about things in which Homer of which you have no knowledge?"
32:52 Socrates: "Now would you say that the art of the rhapsode or the art of medicine was better able to judge of the propriety of these lines?" You said: "Now what would you say that the art..."
33:07.5 Text reads: "And when Homer says 'And she descended into the deep like a leaden plummet..." You said "like a laden plummet." "Leaden" in this sentence refers to "lead" the metal, i.e. a lead weight.
34.33.5 Text reads: Socrates: "And there are many such passages in the Iliad also; as for example in the description of the battle near the rampart...
You said: "Are there many such passages..."
4:51 "Then why in this city of Athens, in which men of merit are always being sought after, is he not at once appointed a general?"
6:14.5 Sense or passion are too much for the 'dry light' of intelligence which mingles with them and becomes discoloured by them."
6.27.5 "The concentration of the mind on a single object"
7:39.5 "In the Protagoras the ancient poets are recognized by Protagoras himself as the original sophists"
7:55.5 "Just as the sophist professes to have all wisdom"
8:02 "even more than the sophist"
15:39 "And if you knew the good speaker, you would also know the inferior speakers to be inferior."
29:08 Surely not about things in Homer of which you have no knowledge."
32:50 Socrates: "Now would you say that the art of the rhapsode or the art of medicine was better able to judge of the propriety of these lines?"
33:07.5 Text reads: "And when Homer says 'And she descended into the deep like a leaden plummet..."
34:31 "And there are many such passages in the Iliad also; as for example in the description of the battle near the rampart...
I am sorry to take so much of your time with the proof listening process, I appreciate the feedback. This recording and editing to me was much easier than the first reading I did, so I am sure in the future I will continue to get better and better. In the future I will proof listen myself so as to hopefully reduce the amount of errors our volunteer listeners have to catch. Thank you for your time in advance!
Thanks for the prompt edits and the time stamps! 
You did a marvelous job blending the edits seamlessly into the original recording. Your recording is ready for the LibriVox catalog now.
Provincetown and Petrified Fish is PL OK! 
You'll see why I read about broom corn when you see my cover for vol. 098, which features a barn, a horse, a shovel, and some brooms leaning against the wall... A nostalgic view of rural life that could be anywhere in the world... 