[SOLO] The Basic Bible - OT by Hooke - tg

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On a mission to get caught up here.

Section 33 is PL OK.

Ruth and Boaz are two of the people in the Bible that I have a good respect for.

More to come.

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Just one note on Section 28:

TIME: 19:36 There is a pause here that would sound better if it was shortened a bit.

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Section 67 is PL OK.

Section 68 has one thing that needs attention:

TIME: 04:13 The recording has "Jacob" instead of "Job".

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[MrsHand]

Corrections for 26, 28, and 68 are uploaded, as well as sections 64 & 65 (Nehemiah).

[lomond]

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One quick note of Section 71:

TIME: 01:16 TEXT: "and the earth is hanging on nothing." COMMENT: Reading has "water" instead of "earth"

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Nothing wrong with Section 72; definitely PL OK.

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Notes on Sections 34 and 35:

Section 34 is PL OK.

Section 35 has a few things needing attention:

TIME: 01:27 TEXT: "the children of Israel said to Samuel, Go on crying to" COMMENT: There is a repeat at "Samuel".

TIME: 02:15 COMMENT: There is a pause here that might need to be trimmed.

TIME: 02:33 COMMENT: There is a repeat beginning at verse 14.

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Notes on Section 36:

TIME: 30:20 TEXT: "And from that day Saul" COMMENT: This phrase is repeated.

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[MrsHand]

Corrections uploaded, as well as a new section, 43. We're in the home stretch!