[SOLO] The Basic Bible - OT by Hooke - tg

lomond · Post by **lomond** » April 28th, 2024, 11:51 am

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On a mission to get caught up here.

Section 33 is PL OK.

Ruth and Boaz are two of the people in the Bible that I have a good respect for.

More to come.

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 8th, 2024, 2:24 pm

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Just one note on Section 28:

TIME: 19:36 There is a pause here that would sound better if it was shortened a bit.

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 9th, 2024, 10:29 pm

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Section 67 is PL OK.

Section 68 has one thing that needs attention:

TIME: 04:13 The recording has "Jacob" instead of "Job".

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MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » May 15th, 2024, 12:52 pm

Corrections for 26, 28, and 68 are uploaded, as well as sections 64 & 65 (Nehemiah).

lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 23rd, 2024, 4:54 pm

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One quick note of Section 71:

TIME: 01:16 TEXT: "and the earth is hanging on nothing." COMMENT: Reading has "water" instead of "earth"

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 24th, 2024, 5:43 pm

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Nothing wrong with Section 72; definitely PL OK.

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 26th, 2024, 5:23 pm

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Notes on Sections 34 and 35:

Section 34 is PL OK.

Section 35 has a few things needing attention:

TIME: 01:27 TEXT: "the children of Israel said to Samuel, Go on crying to" COMMENT: There is a repeat at "Samuel".

TIME: 02:15 COMMENT: There is a pause here that might need to be trimmed.

TIME: 02:33 COMMENT: There is a repeat beginning at verse 14.

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » May 26th, 2024, 9:29 pm

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Notes on Section 36:

TIME: 30:20 TEXT: "And from that day Saul" COMMENT: This phrase is repeated.

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MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » May 28th, 2024, 7:29 pm

Corrections uploaded, as well as a new section, 43. We're in the home stretch!

lomond · Post by **lomond** » June 4th, 2024, 8:50 pm

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A couple notes about Section 37:

TIME: 21:00 COMMENT: "Finger snap" correction here.

TIME: 21:26 COMMENT: "Finger snap" correction here.

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » June 4th, 2024, 11:00 pm

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It is sad to me that Jonathan died.

Notes on Section 38:

TIME: 05:33 TEXT: "Go back to your house in peace" COMMENT: Right after "peace" there is a noise (sorta like a whistle) in the background. I leave it up to you whether it should be edited out.

TIME: 14:44 COMMENT: Similar noise in the background.

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MrsHand · Post by **MrsHand** » June 5th, 2024, 7:30 pm

The whistle sound was my cat, Squeaks. I thought I had got all her contributions, but clearly I missed a couple.

The updated 37 & 38 are ready for spot PL, and section 44 has been added for PL.

The death of Jonathan is heartbreaking.

lomond · Post by **lomond** » June 14th, 2024, 9:30 am

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Just one note for Section 84 (and no Squeaks in the background

):

TIME: 20:26 TEXT: "She has put her fat beasts to death;" COMMENT: Reading sounds like "fast beasts" instead of "fat beasts".

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lomond · Post by **lomond** » Today, 12:08 am

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Just one thing needs attention in Section 85:

TIME: 16:05 COMMENT: There is a repeat here.

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