ej400 wrote:October 30th, 2021, 9:04 pm
I will get those in ASAP
Thank you!
Hi Elijah,
Could you please just take 10 minutes and record the following lines (I can't do anything more until I have them):
Dramatis Personae:
"
Felix King"
Chapter 24:
On page 10, please add the line:
"Oh, God, please make Pat better by the morning. PLEASE do."
On page 11, please add the line:
"I wish I knew whether it was the praying or Peg Bowen that cured Pat,"
Felix, Chapter 26:
00:01
"Why, who ever heard of a sermon without a text?"
1:35
But when Peter preaches just such a sermon, it's a very different story."
2:03
Cecily was just as scared as Sara Ray, but she'd more sense than to show it like that."
2:22
"
Felicity makes enough faces when there's nothing to make faces at,"
Chapter 27:
2:00
Could I ask you please to change the intonation of this sentence for clarity? There should be a pause between "was" and "the":
"
The more religious anything was [pause]
the more fighting there was about it."
Chapter 28:
00:10 Wrong Word:
Peter was simply shirking. (I hear "shrieking" instead of "shirking")
Chapter 30
We ain't going to school till we're sure we are not going to have the measles. This is all I can think of, so I will draw to a close. Remember, you can pray for anything you like. FELIX KING."
You can just record the lines above together in one file. You don't need to edit your previous files (I've already edited the rest of your lines into the master files anyway). I just need the lines above. Quick and simple .
You don't even have to edit -- feel free to send me the rough draft
Thanks,
TJ