I think I up loaded the right one this time
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_03extralines2.mp3
OPEN [DR] A Passage to India by E. M. Forster - rap
Perfect!!!
Thanks, Allie.
Thanks, Allie.
llamaart wrote: ↑November 2nd, 2023, 3:19 pm I think I up loaded the right one this time
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_03extralines2.mp3
Ronny Chapter 5 is now PL OK!
Thanks, Allie!
Thanks, Allie!
llamaart wrote: And here is Ronny chapter 5.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_05.mp3
Hi Elijah!
Could I please request 2 tiny corrections for Dr. Panna Lal Chapter 9:
Cholera is pronounced with the emphasis on the first syllable (kŏl′ər-ə) - you put the emphasis on the second syllable, making it hard to understand.
(Listen here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/cholera )
1:19
DR. PANNA LAL: “Cholera, cholera, what next, what now?”
1:35
DR. PANNA LAL: “I hear cholera, ..."
(kŏl′ər-ə)
1:47
...and the originators of them ought to be discovered and punished authoritatively.”
Instead of "authoritatively," this time I hear "authoriatively" (missing the "t")
Nice acting, Elijah!
I really love the accent!
Thanks,
TJ
Could I please request 2 tiny corrections for Dr. Panna Lal Chapter 9:
Cholera is pronounced with the emphasis on the first syllable (kŏl′ər-ə) - you put the emphasis on the second syllable, making it hard to understand.
(Listen here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/cholera )
1:19
DR. PANNA LAL: “Cholera, cholera, what next, what now?”
1:35
DR. PANNA LAL: “I hear cholera, ..."
(kŏl′ər-ə)
1:47
...and the originators of them ought to be discovered and punished authoritatively.”
Instead of "authoritatively," this time I hear "authoriatively" (missing the "t")
Nice acting, Elijah!
I really love the accent!
Thanks,
TJ
ej400 wrote: I made corrections to Chapter 9 though:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_drpannalal_09.mp3 -2:45
Ronny Chapter 8 Notes:
7:52 pronunciation: "deputations"
I hear deSputations instead of "deputations"
7:56 pronunciation: "concilIation"
[I noticed you pronounced "deputations" correctly in your first submission, so I could probably edit it in:
7:45 in original file
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_082023_02_01_15_10_29.mp3
But unfortunately "conciliation" is incorrectly pronounced in both versions.]
9:30 I hear "diverts" instead of "deserts"
[This was pronounced correctly in the original submission -- 9:25 in original submission]
Maybe it would be easiest if you simply reread these two lines, and then submitted them in a separate file entitled:
passagetoindia_ronny_08extralines.mp3
Page 19:
"...There had been deputations and conciliation committees under the auspices of Turton, and all the normal work of Chandrapore had been hung up..."
RONNY: “When the animal runs into us the Nawab loses his head, deserts his unfortunate chauffeur, intrudes upon Miss Derek . . . no great crimes, no great crimes, but no white man would have done it.”
Thanks!
7:52 pronunciation: "deputations"
I hear deSputations instead of "deputations"
7:56 pronunciation: "concilIation"
[I noticed you pronounced "deputations" correctly in your first submission, so I could probably edit it in:
7:45 in original file
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_082023_02_01_15_10_29.mp3
But unfortunately "conciliation" is incorrectly pronounced in both versions.]
9:30 I hear "diverts" instead of "deserts"
[This was pronounced correctly in the original submission -- 9:25 in original submission]
llamaart wrote: Here are all Ronny chapters with PL notes.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_08.mp3
Maybe it would be easiest if you simply reread these two lines, and then submitted them in a separate file entitled:
passagetoindia_ronny_08extralines.mp3
Page 19:
"...There had been deputations and conciliation committees under the auspices of Turton, and all the normal work of Chandrapore had been hung up..."
RONNY: “When the animal runs into us the Nawab loses his head, deserts his unfortunate chauffeur, intrudes upon Miss Derek . . . no great crimes, no great crimes, but no white man would have done it.”
Thanks!
Ronny Chapters 24 & 26 are PL OK!
Nicely done, Allie!
Ronny Chapter 28 Notes:
0:36 I hear "where she had BEEN worshiped" instead of "where she had worshipped".
RONNY: would put up a tablet to her in the Northamptonshire church where she had worshipped, recording the dates of her birth and death and the fact that she had been buried at sea. This would be sufficient.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_28.mp3
0:36 I hear "where she had BEEN worshiped" instead of "where she had worshipped".
RONNY: would put up a tablet to her in the Northamptonshire church where she had worshipped, recording the dates of her birth and death and the fact that she had been buried at sea. This would be sufficient.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_ronny_28.mp3
Ronny Chapter 36 is PL OK!
Nicely read, Allie!
Thanks!
Nicely read, Allie!
Thanks!
Chapter 11:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_11_forster_128kb.mp3
DRAFT -- Not ready for PL [MISSING: Aziz]
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_11_forster_128kb.mp3
DRAFT -- Not ready for PL [MISSING: Aziz]
I think I've got it:benderca wrote: ↑February 22nd, 2024, 2:21 pm Hi Elijah!
Could I please request 2 tiny corrections for Dr. Panna Lal Chapter 9:
Cholera is pronounced with the emphasis on the first syllable (kŏl′ər-ə) - you put the emphasis on the second syllable, making it hard to understand.
(Listen here: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/us/pronunciation/english/cholera )
1:19
DR. PANNA LAL: “Cholera, cholera, what next, what now?”
1:35
DR. PANNA LAL: “I hear cholera, ..."
(kŏl′ər-ə)
1:47
...and the originators of them ought to be discovered and punished authoritatively.”
Instead of "authoritatively," this time I hear "authoriatively" (missing the "t")
Nice acting, Elijah!
I really love the accent!
Thanks,
TJ
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_drpannalal_09.mp3
Perfect! Thank you so much, Elijah! And that's a wrap for Dr. Panna Lal.ej400 wrote: ↑March 16th, 2024, 7:40 am
I think I've got it:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/passagetoindia_drpannalal_09.mp3