I'm a little fussy about facts. Just one year needs to be corrected and then it should be PL OK. Good job overall. Although to my mind you are recording these lengthy chapters too fast. (Just kidding, I wish I could edit my recordings as quickly as you)
notes:
24:33 should be "1839" not "1834" in "Tierra del Fuego in 1839, says :"
A couple of small things to fix and this should be PL OK.
15:25 should be "her" instead of "his" in "and then her friends were compelled to come to terms"
26:16 should be "consent" not "consequent" in "In this case the consent and espousal "