Hello! You have such a soft and wonderful voice to listen to, and your narration is very nice
I do have just a couple of
PL notes for you, but please don't be discouraged, these aren't anything we can't work on together
:
0:00 There is just a little bit of background noise throughout the recording. I believe just a little bit of noise reduction (if you are using audacity), would help this out.
@0:00-0:02 there are just a couple small sounds in the very beginning of the recording. Also, in the beginning of a recording, we usually aim for just 0.5 to 1 second of silence in the beginning, so, as this is just a tiny bit too long, you could trim those little sounds out and it should be right on
@ about 0:32 to 0:36 there is a small background sound over this area of the sentence.
@ from about 29:40 to about 32:03 there are some occasional sounds of a dog barking. My best recommendation for this, is usually if there are sounds interrupting the recording, while recording, usually pause and wait. For example, louder cars on the road across from me will get picked up on my mic, so I'll usually pause and wait. I don't think it's too distracting, but if you would be able to maybe re-do that little section that'd be fantastic!
@ 47:51 (the end of the recording), over the "End of Chapter 3" there are a couple more sounds. Could you maybe redo the "End of Chapter 3" please?
Again, very good reading, the narration was wonderful and overall you did a very nice job!
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Great work!
Thank you,
Elijah