[COMPLETE] The World that Never Was, by Arthur St. John Adcock - brrot

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 11th, 2024, 2:13 am

Here is Chapter 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:01

Thank you!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 11th, 2024, 9:35 am

ej400 wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 2:13 am Here is Chapter 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:01

Thank you!

Thank you, Elijah. This is in the MW for PL.

Winnifred · Post by **Winnifred** » March 11th, 2024, 4:04 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 2:13 am Here is Chapter 2:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:01

Thank you!

Thanks, Elijah. Just one PL change to consider; At 3:54, I hear “...it’s all exactly like it is in the daydream, only it’s dark.” But the text reads “..it’s all exactly like it is in the daytime, only it’s dark.” I think that’s a bit of a change to the meaning so needs correcting.

Cheers,

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 16th, 2024, 7:52 am

Winnifred wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 4:04 pm Thanks, Elijah. Just one PL change to consider; At 3:54, I hear “...it’s all exactly like it is in the daydream, only it’s dark.” But the text reads “..it’s all exactly like it is in the daytime, only it’s dark.” I think that’s a bit of a change to the meaning so needs correcting.

Cheers,

Here is the correction:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:02

Thanks!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 16th, 2024, 7:57 am

ej400 wrote: ↑March 16th, 2024, 7:52 am
Winnifred wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 4:04 pm Thanks, Elijah. Just one PL change to consider; At 3:54, I hear “...it’s all exactly like it is in the daydream, only it’s dark.” But the text reads “..it’s all exactly like it is in the daytime, only it’s dark.” I think that’s a bit of a change to the meaning so needs correcting.

Cheers,
Here is the correction:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:02

Thanks!

Thanks! Marked for Spot PL.

Winnifred · Post by **Winnifred** » March 16th, 2024, 10:49 am

ej400 wrote: ↑March 16th, 2024, 7:52 am
Winnifred wrote: ↑March 11th, 2024, 4:04 pm Thanks, Elijah. Just one PL change to consider; At 3:54, I hear “...it’s all exactly like it is in the daydream, only it’s dark.” But the text reads “..it’s all exactly like it is in the daytime, only it’s dark.” I think that’s a bit of a change to the meaning so needs correcting.

Cheers,
Here is the correction:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_02_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:02

Thanks!

Spot PL OK!

Thanks,

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 24th, 2024, 9:54 pm

Chapter 17:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_17_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:50

lauraallenby · Post by **lauraallenby** » March 25th, 2024, 2:37 am

Hi there,

I'm so sorry I've been having some life difficulties and some technical difficulties too. Can I please pass on chapter 6 & 7 o someone else for now as I don't want to hold up your project any longer!

Hope to be back recording again soon and good luck finishing up this one. I look forward to listening.

Laura Allenby

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 25th, 2024, 7:44 am

ej400 wrote: ↑March 24th, 2024, 9:54 pm Chapter 17:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_17_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:50

Thank you, in MW for PL.

Just FYI, I will be opening up the others you've claimed, as they expire this Wed. and Thurs. You can claim them one at a time if you still want to do them and they are still open.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 25th, 2024, 7:46 am

lauraallenby wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 2:37 am Hi there,

I'm so sorry I've been having some life difficulties and some technical difficulties too. Can I please pass on chapter 6 & 7 o someone else for now as I don't want to hold up your project any longer!

Hope to be back recording again soon and good luck finishing up this one. I look forward to listening.

Laura Allenby

No problem, and thanks for letting us know. Hope things get better soon.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 25th, 2024, 7:47 am

brownrottger wrote: ↑January 14th, 2024, 7:06 am All set. As soon as the MW is completed, I will move us to Readers Wanted.
Have a great day!

Hi Christine - Please move this back to Readers Wanted. More sections expire this week, so please leave it there until you hear from me that we're all "Found."
Thanks!

Post by **brownrottger** » March 25th, 2024, 7:50 am

Done.

Winnifred · Post by **Winnifred** » March 25th, 2024, 3:38 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 24th, 2024, 9:54 pm Chapter 17:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_17_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:50

Thanks, Elijah.

A few fixes needed (all the same fix, actually). One of the main characters, introduced in Chapter 4, is "P.C. 1 1/2" (Police Constable One and a Half). You've read his name, which appears as just "1 1/2" throughout the rest of the book, as "It." Unfortunately, it appears multiple times in this chapter, so you're going to have to fix all of them, or your listeners will be very confused.

The first time is at 0:30: “Just as Olive raised her eyes, after reading out the answer, she saw [it] dart suddenly from beside the snuff-box…” That [it] should be read as “1 1/2” (One and a Half). It happens again at 1:14, 1:41, 2:25, 3:48, 4:00, and 4:12.

Thanks,

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 26th, 2024, 1:35 am

Here are Chapters 18 & 20:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_18_adcock_128kb.mp3 -14:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_20_adcock_128kb.mp3 -7:04

Thanks!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 26th, 2024, 7:21 am

ej400 wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 1:35 am Here are Chapters 18 & 20:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_18_adcock_128kb.mp3 -14:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_20_adcock_128kb.mp3 -7:04

Thanks!

Thank you, in the MW for PL.