OPEN [DR] Pollyanna of the Orange Blossoms by Harriet Lummis Smith - rap

[Salvationist]

I'll claim Mrs. Bacon

It is good to meet you, Stunning! You are welcome to Mrs. Bacon.

[JHedrick]

Narrator Chapter 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_narrator_03.mp3 [20:16]

[brownrottger]

Here is Judith chapter 5.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_judiththayler_05.mp3 6:48

Best wishes, Allie

Hi Allie, Just in case you didn't subscribe or book mark this project( I too frequently forget to myself)
Judith Thayer Chapter 5 Awesome voice acting! You have the air of condescension spot on! Since it is Word Perfect PL, I have these notes:
0:02 should be "Judith Thayer" I heard "Judith Thayler"

1:06 should be "I'm Mrs. Russell Thayer"; I heard "I'm Miss Russell Thayler"

1:43 delete word not in text "by" should be "What time shall I come?" I heard "What time shall I come by?"

2:29 should be ""Says he gets tired of so much of the same thing." I heard "Says he gets tired of too much of the same thing."

2:54 should be " “I suppose it depends on what you’ve been used to." I heard “I suppose it depends on what you're used to."

2:56 should be "Perhaps you came from a small town" I heard "Perhaps you come from a small town"

3:18 should be "And, while it hasn’t " I heard "And, while it hadn’t"

3:25 should be "it's a real city" I heard "It was a real city"

3:32 should be "there’s nothing here that’s what you’d call a novelty to me.”
I heard "there’s nothing here what you’d call a novelty to me.”

3:40 should be "You have to get those cakes at a confectioner’s, don’t you?”
I heard "You have to get these cakes at a confectioner’s, don’t you?”

4:51 should be "who could amuse herself " I heard "who's used to amuse herself"

4:57 should be "or feeding the elephants" I heard "or feeding elephants"

5:02 should be "excitements of city life" I heard "excitements of a city life"

5:06 should be "Didn't you feel like slapping me?" I heard "Don't you feel like slapping me?"

5:42 should be "But it seems as if you got more fun" I heard "But it seems as if you've got more fun"

5:51 should be "Mrs. Pendleton" I heard " Miss Pendleton"

[brownrottger]

Mr. Moore Chapter 16
2:19 missing word "Yes" should be "Yes, I'm her father"

3:58 should be "and she wouldn't go home." I heard "and she couldn't go home."

4:04 missing word "and" should be "I didn’t hear the telephone, of course, and I didn’t hear her go"

[brownrottger]

Mr. Moore Chapter 20 is PL ok.

[brownrottger]

John Pendleton Chapters 2, 21 and 23 are all PL ok.

[silverquill]

Mr. Moore Chapter 16
2:19 missing word "Yes" should be "Yes, I'm her father"

3:58 should be "and she wouldn't go home." I heard "and she couldn't go home."

4:04 missing word "and" should be "I didn’t hear the telephone, of course, and I didn’t hear her go"

Here is the corrected file. I thought these were minor, especially the omission of "and."

I d now see that there is a note the the proof listening will be "word perfect." It is kind of buried, so I think a more noticeable alert to readers would be a big help. I have done a lot of DRs and plays and this is the first time I have ever seen one asking for word perfect reading. But, not big deal. You've got it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_mrmoore_16.mp3

Thanks for your WP PL, Christine!

[Salvationist]

Here is the corrected file. I thought these were minor, especially the omission of "and."

I d now see that there is a note the the proof listening will be "word perfect." It is kind of buried, so I think a more noticeable alert to readers would be a big help. I have done a lot of DRs and plays and this is the first time I have ever seen one asking for word perfect reading. But, not big deal. You've got it.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_mrmoore_16.mp3

Thanks for your WP PL, Christine!

Thank you for helping us out with this project, Larry! I particularly appreciate your willingness to submit these changes, especially considering that it was not initially obvious that the prooflistening in this project is word perfect. I have taken you up on your suggestion of making the alert more noticeable on the first post. Thanks again for contributing your vocal skills to this DR!

[brownrottger]

Mr. Moore Chapter 16 is PL ok. Thanks Larry!

[brownrottger]

Narrator Chapter 3
0:21 missing word "the"; should be "those meccas of the summer pleasure-seekers "

4:20 should be "the girl, on whose motherliness Pollyanna had just commented"; I heard "the girl, on whose motherlessness Pollyanna had just commented"

6:44 should be "explained this astonishing child,"; I heard "explained the astonishing child,"

15:08 should be "Would that mother never come!; I heard "Would that his mother never come!"

16:40 should be "and pounced upon a small boy,"; I heard "and pounced upon the small boy,"

[norahnelson]

Here's Milly Snow:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_millysnow_22.mp3 (0:35)

Thank you,

[JHedrick]

Narrator Chapter 3
0:21 missing word "the"; should be "those meccas of the summer pleasure-seekers "

4:20 should be "the girl, on whose motherliness Pollyanna had just commented"; I heard "the girl, on whose motherlessness Pollyanna had just commented"

6:44 should be "explained this astonishing child,"; I heard "explained the astonishing child,"

15:08 should be "Would that mother never come!; I heard "Would that his mother never come!"

16:40 should be "and pounced upon a small boy,"; I heard "and pounced upon the small boy,"

Good Job! I am always amazed that you can hear errors when I have listened repeatedly to a file. It is probably just my brain hearing (or seeing) what it expects.

Corrections: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/pollyannaoftheorangeblossoms_narrator_03.mp3 [20:16]

[brownrottger]

Narrator Chapter 3 is PL ok. Sorry for the error in my first time stamp.

[JHedrick]

Narrator Chapter 3 is PL ok. Sorry for the error in my first time stamp.

Not a problem

Editing four today

[brownrottger]

Milly Snow Chapter 22 is PL ok.