Hello HollyAnn! Welcome to Librivox and congrats on your first recording! I really enjoyed your pacing and energy with all the different voices. Just a few bits of feedback.
Opening - Please remove your location from the intro. If you would like to say your location, you can do that in the outro. Please remove the "Phd" after the author's name.
Overall audio - There does appear to be a high amount of clipping throughout your audio. If you look at your audio file, there are probably spikes that may flatten out towards the top, which means your audio can sound distorted. This can happen when you are a bit too close to the mic, or when you increase the volume of your voice. Can you please try the compressor feature to see if that will help with the distortion? If you're using audacity, here's a video done by one of our LV volunteers.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wJ3lOTDsN6c
Once any edits are made, please re-upload the file, under the same file name, and post in this thread so I can do a quick spot check.