mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2024, 7:08 pmAnother fine chapter. One change needed as we can't shortchange the man.
2:02 should be "thousand" not "hundred" in "number more than seven thousand."
you're right ! How could I mix up those two numbers. 7000 is indeed more impressive than 700.
Here it is again, I only changed that half-sentence, the rest stays the same.
mleigh wrote: ↑May 18th, 2024, 7:08 pmAnother fine chapter. One change needed as we can't shortchange the man.
2:02 should be "thousand" not "hundred" in "number more than seven thousand."
you're right ! How could I mix up those two numbers. 7000 is indeed more impressive than 700.
Here it is again, I only changed that half-sentence, the rest stays the same.
mleigh wrote: ↑May 21st, 2024, 7:06 pm
Chapter 8 is PL OK. What grim selections the author chose.
I'll get to chapter 9 tomorrow.
Thanks,
M
If you thought 8 was dark, wait until you listen to 9 lol.
You are correct about that. I looked it up online and whatever website I went to said it was the first yellow fever epidemic in the world. Definitely not a cheerful topic.
mleigh wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2024, 6:37 pm
I looked it up online and whatever website I went to said it was the first yellow fever epidemic in the world. Definitely not a cheerful topic.
you will be more pleased with this author, the two excerpts in this section are rather funny and well written. And with a sort of happy ending each time.
I really enjoyed this one, and maybe we should find the short story collection of this author to run it as group project.
mleigh wrote: ↑May 22nd, 2024, 6:37 pm
I looked it up online and whatever website I went to said it was the first yellow fever epidemic in the world. Definitely not a cheerful topic.
you will be more pleased with this author, the two excerpts in this section are rather funny and well written. And with a sort of happy ending each time.
I really enjoyed this one, and maybe we should find the short story collection of this author to run it as group project.
Kitty wrote: ↑May 25th, 2024, 2:12 am
here is 21, I really enjoyed this story, I love mythology stories and this is about how the yellow fever came into the world.