[COMPLETE] The World that Never Was, by Arthur St. John Adcock - brrot

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 26th, 2024, 11:30 am

Chapters 19 & 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_19_adcock_128kb.mp3 -15:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_21_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:59

Thanks!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 26th, 2024, 12:13 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 11:30 am Chapters 19 & 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_19_adcock_128kb.mp3 -15:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_21_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:59

Thanks!

Thank you, also in the MW for PL.

joaosenna · Post by **joaosenna** » March 26th, 2024, 4:55 pm

Hi.

I would like to read Section 6 (Chapter VI).

Thanks

João Senna

Winnifred · Post by **Winnifred** » March 26th, 2024, 5:24 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 1:35 am Here are Chapters 18 & 20:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_18_adcock_128kb.mp3 -14:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_20_adcock_128kb.mp3 -7:04

Thanks!

ej400 wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 11:30 am Chapters 19 & 21:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_19_adcock_128kb.mp3 -15:17
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_21_adcock_128kb.mp3 -6:59

Thanks!

Thanks, Elijah. You've certainly been pumping them out!

Chapter 20 is PL OK. Just a few corrections for the others.

For Chapter 18:

At 0:56, there’s two words missing: “The one forlorn comfort she had was in the good, resolute thump, thump of Gog’s mighty feet…” This sentence doesn’t make sense without the first one, and although the second doesn’t change meaning, since you’re tackling this sentence anyway….

At 4:58, you’ve read “retunes” instead of “retinues” (reh-tin-use; followers) in the list of participants in the Fairy Court. You might want to correct that so as not to confuse your listeners.

For Chapter 19:

You’ve misread the chapter title at 0:20. It’s meant to be “Magog is cured,” not “Magog is cursed.” That’s a significant change and bound to confuse listeners.

For Chapter 21:

At 5:21, I hear “She laughed silly, all the same, as if she knew more than she would say.” But the text reads “She laughed slily, all the same, as if she knew more than she would say.”

Cheers,

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 26th, 2024, 7:46 pm

joaosenna wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 4:55 pm Hi.

I would like to read Section 6 (Chapter VI).

Thanks

João Senna

Hi, João! Sorry I said "Bem-vinda". I thought joãosenna was all your first name!

I've reserved section 6 for you. To officially assign it, I need to know what name you would like to be known under in the catalog. It can be your screen name, your real name, or a nickname. If you'd like, you can also add the URL to a webpage or blog that you have. Send me a message by Friday with this info and I will get that assigned to you.

joaosenna · Post by **joaosenna** » March 26th, 2024, 8:41 pm

Thanks Verla

Can be my real name, João Senna.

Cheers.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 27th, 2024, 6:17 am

joaosenna wrote: ↑March 26th, 2024, 8:41 pm Thanks Verla

Can be my real name, João Senna.

Cheers.

Great! I have you in the database and you will see in the Magic Window (MW) that section 6 has been assigned to you.

joaosenna · Post by **joaosenna** » March 27th, 2024, 7:33 am

ej400 · Post by **ej400** » March 27th, 2024, 11:38 pm

Last one, Chapter 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_03_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:15

I'll be working on the PL notes over the weekend here. Thanks!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 28th, 2024, 12:57 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 27th, 2024, 11:38 pm Last one, Chapter 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_03_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:15

I'll be working on the PL notes over the weekend here. Thanks!

In the MW for PL

Winnifred · Post by **Winnifred** » March 28th, 2024, 3:02 pm

ej400 wrote: ↑March 27th, 2024, 11:38 pm Last one, Chapter 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_03_adcock_128kb.mp3 -12:15

I'll be working on the PL notes over the weekend here. Thanks!

Thanks, Elijah. Just one change needed: at 8:26, I hear “…and it won’t be good, my pretty, to have her back, quite strong and well again and all just like it used to be!” but the text reads “…and won’t it be good, my pretty, to have her back, quite strong and well again and all just like it used to be!” As this reversal of words says the opposite of what is intended, I think it needs to be fixed.

I'm going to be away from my computer from Saturday morning until next Saturday, April 6, but I'll have my iPad and cell with me, so should be able to do the spot PL with those. I just can't run any files through Checker.

Cheers,

ShellyW · Post by **ShellyW** » March 29th, 2024, 1:51 pm

It looks like Chapter 7 is the only one left - I'll do it!

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 29th, 2024, 4:14 pm

ShellyW wrote: ↑March 29th, 2024, 1:51 pm It looks like Chapter 7 is the only one left - I'll do it!

Thanks, you've been assigned!

Christine, we can go back to Readers Found.

ShellyW · Post by **ShellyW** » March 30th, 2024, 12:03 pm

Here's chapter 7. What a fun story

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_07_adcock_128kb.mp3

Edit: duration (14:46)

vviera · Post by **vviera** » March 30th, 2024, 1:44 pm

ShellyW wrote: ↑March 30th, 2024, 12:03 pm Here's chapter 7. What a fun story

https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/worldthatneverwas_07_adcock_128kb.mp3

Well that was quick, Shelly! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I got it off the recording already, so nothing for you to do, but don't forget to put duration when you post the URL. It just saves your BC a step of opening it.

Winnifred, our DPL, is out of town, so it might take a bit for you to hear something.

Thanks