Another PL OK.KevinS wrote: ↑February 9th, 2024, 11:51 pm Chapter 4
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_04_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:18)
I'm rooting for Eben et al.
M
Me, too! Ted will have to go on his long flight first, I imagine.mleigh wrote: ↑February 11th, 2024, 8:20 pmAnother PL OK.KevinS wrote: ↑February 9th, 2024, 11:51 pm Chapter 4
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_04_dixon_128kb.mp3 (11:18)
I'm rooting for Eben et al.
M
Thank you!mleigh wrote: ↑February 25th, 2024, 11:53 amGreat job with the chapter. It is PL OK.KevinS wrote: ↑February 19th, 2024, 2:42 pm Chapter 5
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_05_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:24)
M
Chapters 6 and 7 are both PL OK.KevinS wrote: ↑February 23rd, 2024, 7:36 pm Chapter 6
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_06_dixon_128kb.mp3 (13:19)
I don't know how I missed these posts until today.KevinS wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 1:01 am Chapter 8
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:57)
Oh I'm so sorry. Sorry about uploading the wrong file and also sorry to hear about your arm.mleigh wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 6:52 pmI don't know how I missed these posts until today.KevinS wrote: ↑March 6th, 2024, 1:01 am Chapter 8
https://librivox.org/uploads/brownrottger/overtheoceantoparis_08_dixon_128kb.mp3 (12:57)
Would you mind so very much going through this file again. I think it got skipped with the editing. Here are my comments for the first approximately 4 1/2 minutes.
0:15 please delete "ted scott head was" as it is corrected at 0:17 Ted Scott’s head was in a whirl"
0:47 please delete "now look here" as it is corrected at 0:49 ‘Now, look here, Ted,’’
1:42 please delete “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sens’’ as it is corrected at 1:46 “‘What Mr. Hapworth says is of the most sensible, mon ami,’’
2:04 please delete ""Is it not so?’’ “As you like,’’ " as it is corrected at 2:10 ""Is it not so?’’
“As you like,’’ assented Walter Hapworth with a bow. "
2:22 please shorten the silence a little between "feeling the" and "moisture"
3:03 and 3:06 are repeats "The men who gave them that start" and then shorten the pause afterwards
3:33 please delete "There are so many qualifications " as it is corrected at 3:36 "There are so many qualifications required of an aviator "
4:29 please delete "and for the time the subject was d" as it is corrected at 4:32 "and for the time the subject was dropped."
I wouldn't ask except for I am dealing with some significant arm pain at the moment, and while it is easy to listen to files, it is hard for me to note down corrections.
Thanks so much,
M