[COMPLETE] At the Mountains of Madness, by HP Lovecraft - icequeen
Part 3 ready for PL. The record long sentence so far: 137 words. Ol' HP just didn't like periods.
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Hi Mark,
Section 2 is PL OK!
I may be late in PLing the sections for a while,
There's a big plumbing problem with my house and that's taking up much of my time, unfortunately.
Section 2 is PL OK!
I may be late in PLing the sections for a while,
There's a big plumbing problem with my house and that's taking up much of my time, unfortunately.
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Hi Mark,
I managed to PL section 3 and that's PL OK as well. Very well read.
This story is indeed getting dark in tone.
I managed to PL section 3 and that's PL OK as well. Very well read.
This story is indeed getting dark in tone.
Yeah, HPL wasn't known for his light comedies.This story is indeed getting dark in tone.
Part 4 ready for PL.
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Hi,
Part 4 is PL OK
Cold and colder!
Part 4 is PL OK
Cold and colder!
Part 5 ready for PL.
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Hi,
I've PL'ed Part 5 and there's one spot that might need redoing:
at 11:26 a little mixup in editing, I heard “other than the other” in "on the jutting eminence, while the other still bore a fantastic conical monument carved out of the solid rock.."
Not a big deal if you choose to leave it as is. Everything else is great.
Betty
I've PL'ed Part 5 and there's one spot that might need redoing:
at 11:26 a little mixup in editing, I heard “other than the other” in "on the jutting eminence, while the other still bore a fantastic conical monument carved out of the solid rock.."
Not a big deal if you choose to leave it as is. Everything else is great.
Betty
10 takes and I still got it wrong.libraryanne wrote: ↑February 12th, 2024, 7:01 am Hi,
I've PL'ed Part 5 and there's one spot that might need redoing:
at 11:26 a little mixup in editing, I heard “other than the other” in "on the jutting eminence, while the other still bore a fantastic conical monument carved out of the solid rock.."
Not a big deal if you choose to leave it as is. Everything else is great.
Betty
Also Part 6 ready for PL.
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Hi,
Part 5 is all set.
and Part 6 is PL OK too.
I hadn't remembered Lovecraft's vocabulary and writing style. It does make it harder for narrators, that's for sure.
Part 5 is all set.
and Part 6 is PL OK too.
I hadn't remembered Lovecraft's vocabulary and writing style. It does make it harder for narrators, that's for sure.
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Hi,
Sections 7 and 8 are both PL OK!
My goodness, you're getting through this solo quickly (and marvelously.)
Betty
Sections 7 and 8 are both PL OK!
My goodness, you're getting through this solo quickly (and marvelously.)
Betty
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Hi,
Ive PL'ed Section 9 and there are a couple of glitches around the same point in the file:
At 3:02 missing “No such structure” in “No such structure came to our minds as we recalled our flight,
At 3:11 I couldn’t hear "Ice rift” clearly.. kind of sounded like ife rift in “or that it had been totally shattered in an ice rift we had noticed.
Everything else sounds really good.
Betty
Ive PL'ed Section 9 and there are a couple of glitches around the same point in the file:
At 3:02 missing “No such structure” in “No such structure came to our minds as we recalled our flight,
At 3:11 I couldn’t hear "Ice rift” clearly.. kind of sounded like ife rift in “or that it had been totally shattered in an ice rift we had noticed.
Everything else sounds really good.
Betty
Ife rift. Nice.
9 & 10 ready for PL.
9 & 10 ready for PL.
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Hi,
Sections 9 is all good now and Section 10 is PL OK too.
Betty
Sections 9 is all good now and Section 10 is PL OK too.
Betty