[COMPLETE] Complete Poems of Anne Brontë - icequeen

[alanmapstone]

I would like to claim sections 37, 40 and 41.

Thanks Bruce, sections assigned

[alanmapstone]

the Section 3 & 4 ready For PL.
the partying 1 (2:46)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_03_annebronte_128kb_mp3_01.mp3

PL Notes for section 3:
The file name is incorrect, it should be completepoems_03_annebronte_128kb
at 0.00 the opening silence should be between 0.5 and 1 second
at 0.19 the text is The young leaves of the aspen trees but the word the is missing
at 0.28 the text is And his sweet lady by his side but the word And is missing
at 0.57 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.06 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.20 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.25 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.31 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.35 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.38 the text is He waved to her a last 'Adieu!' but the word to is missing
at 1.44 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.49 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.54 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 2.23 the text is Sweet spring will smile o'er hill and plain but I hear and tree and plain
at 2.40 the outro should be End of poem This recording is in the Public Domain
at 2.44 the ending silence should be 5 seconds

There are other places where the gaps between lines would benefit by being shorter, poetry has a natural rhythm which is lost if the gaps between lines are too long.
The volume is low at 86.8 Db, it would be better increased by 2 Db.

Please make these changes and upload with the correct filename.

I will check section 4 later.

[AudioCook]

Here are my selections for review:

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_10_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :42
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_28_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :45

Thanks,
Anthony

[alanmapstone]

Here are my selections for review:
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_10_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :42
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_28_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :45

Thanks, Ready for PL!

[ChocolateYoddah]

I'd like to claim Section 45 The Power of Love, please.

[alanmapstone]

I'd like to claim Section 45 The Power of Love, please.

Thank you, section 45 assigned.

[alanmapstone]

Here are my selections for review:
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_10_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :42
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_28_annebronte_128kb.mp3 :45

Both PL OK!
Thanks Anthony

[MorphineLolly]

the Section 3 & 4 ready For PL.
the partying 1 (2:46)
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_03_annebronte_128kb_mp3_01.mp3

PL Notes for section 3:
The file name is incorrect, it should be completepoems_03_annebronte_128kb
at 0.00 the opening silence should be between 0.5 and 1 second
at 0.19 the text is The young leaves of the aspen trees but the word the is missing
at 0.28 the text is And his sweet lady by his side but the word And is missing
at 0.57 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.06 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.20 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.25 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.31 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.35 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.38 the text is He waved to her a last 'Adieu!' but the word to is missing
at 1.44 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.49 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 1.54 gap too long please close to 0.5 second
at 2.23 the text is Sweet spring will smile o'er hill and plain but I hear and tree and plain
at 2.40 the outro should be End of poem This recording is in the Public Domain
at 2.44 the ending silence should be 5 seconds

There are other places where the gaps between lines would benefit by being shorter, poetry has a natural rhythm which is lost if the gaps between lines are too long.
The volume is low at 86.8 Db, it would be better increased by 2 Db.

Please make these changes and upload with the correct filename.

I will check section 4 later.

Ah, Now that I see what I need to do please do not PL the second section. Alow me to clean up the paceing, first I hope you are having, a pleasant holidays . And thank you

I'll upload both again once i do this.

[ChocolateYoddah]

Here's Section 45 The Power Of Love. Happy Holidays.

Read by Chocolate Yoddah

Runtime 3:55

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_45_annebronte_128kb.mp3

[alanmapstone]

Here's Section 45 The Power Of Love. Happy Holidays.
Read by Chocolate Yoddah
Runtime 3:55
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_45_annebronte_128kb.mp3

Thanks, Ready for PL!

[alanmapstone]

Here's Section 45 The Power Of Love. Happy Holidays.
Read by Chocolate Yoddah
Runtime 3:55
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_45_annebronte_128kb.mp3

Section 45 is PL OK!

Just one comment: Your poetry recordings would sound better if you left smaller gaps between lines and verses. Poetry has it's own natural rhythm which can be lost if there are too many pauses

[alanmapstone]

Section 12 is Ready for PL!

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/completepoems_12_annebronte_128kb.mp3
2.40

[tanialil]

May I please read:
#8 - An Orphan's Lament
#9 - Lines Written at Thorp Green

[alanmapstone]

May I please read:
#8 - An Orphan's Lament
#9 - Lines Written at Thorp Green

Hi tania
Welcome to Librivox
I note that you have passed your 1-minute test
I will reserve sections 8&9 for you.
I need to register you as a Reader. Please let me know what name you would like to appear in the catalogue with your recordings. This can be your forumname, real name or anything you choose.

[ChocolateYoddah]

I'll adjust my natural rhythm to accommodate. I'm a slow reader. Thanks for the feedback.