Memoirs of the life of Anthony Benezet, by Roberts Vaux-ag
Angela is added as DPL. Have a good day, All!
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Hi Jim!JimCallahanVO wrote: ↑July 6th, 2023, 12:55 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_02_vaux_128kb.mp3 12:48
I'll take sections 2 & 3 as well
Thanks!
PL's been completed for the first three sections--please see my feedback / edits needed below:
All sections (Preface, Introductory Remarks, and Section 1): Volume of recordings should be between 86 - 92 dB (or between -16 to -21 LUFS).
Please refer to this article (https://wiki.librivox.org/index.php?title=Tech_Specs) for the tech requirements of Librivox recordings. I also recommend downloading and using the Checker application to verify if each audio file meets said requirements.
Section 1 only:
12:35 Stumble / dropping out of sound at the end of the sentence. It came out as "... and John Pemberton of Philadel-mm..."
12:43 Another stumble / dropping out of sound. It sounds like "July 202-mm..."
Otherwise, great work narrating these sections. Please re-upload these for spot PL once you've made the edits requested.
Looking forward to PL'ing the other sections assigned to you--I like your style of reading.
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Sections 3 and 4 have been made available.
May I please have section 3?
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The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Hello! Here is section 3 (7:51).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
~Channeling my inner condiment while I KETCHUP (thanks for your patience)~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Hi Claire. Thanks for uploading this section; I've just PL'ed it.Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 14th, 2023, 8:33 pm Hello! Here is section 3 (7:51).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
Please edit the file based on my feedback below:
* 0:44 - Please remove the stumble between 'of' and 'friends'
* 2:36 - Please add a short pause between 'afforded' (last word of the previous paragraph) and 'in the first edition...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
* 2:52 - There is a stumble in saying the word 'habituated' (i.e. i hear 'h-habituated'). Please remove this.
* 5:34 - Please remove the pause between 'as the' and 'fruit'
* 6:28 - Please remove the pause between 'might also be' and 'profitably added'
* 6:53 - Please shorten, if not eliminate, the pause between 'necessary parts' and 'of an'
* 7:07 - Please lengthen the pause, by a bit, between 'both to teachers and pupils' (ending of the previous paragraph) and 'It might also be...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
Once edited, please upload this so I can do spot PL.
Thank you! I've made the requested edits and have re-uploaded the file. Time decreased by one second, so is now 7:50.yannaaragon wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 2:38 amHi Claire. Thanks for uploading this section; I've just PL'ed it.Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 14th, 2023, 8:33 pm Hello! Here is section 3 (7:51).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
Please edit the file based on my feedback below:
* 0:44 - Please remove the stumble between 'of' and 'friends'
* 2:36 - Please add a short pause between 'afforded' (last word of the previous paragraph) and 'in the first edition...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
* 2:52 - There is a stumble in saying the word 'habituated' (i.e. i hear 'h-habituated'). Please remove this.
* 5:34 - Please remove the pause between 'as the' and 'fruit'
* 6:28 - Please remove the pause between 'might also be' and 'profitably added'
* 6:53 - Please shorten, if not eliminate, the pause between 'necessary parts' and 'of an'
* 7:07 - Please lengthen the pause, by a bit, between 'both to teachers and pupils' (ending of the previous paragraph) and 'It might also be...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
Once edited, please upload this so I can do spot PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
~Channeling my inner condiment while I KETCHUP (thanks for your patience)~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Hey Claire!Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 6:06 pmThank you! I've made the requested edits and have re-uploaded the file. Time decreased by one second, so is now 7:50.yannaaragon wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 2:38 amHi Claire. Thanks for uploading this section; I've just PL'ed it.Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 14th, 2023, 8:33 pm Hello! Here is section 3 (7:51).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
Please edit the file based on my feedback below:
* 0:44 - Please remove the stumble between 'of' and 'friends'
* 2:36 - Please add a short pause between 'afforded' (last word of the previous paragraph) and 'in the first edition...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
* 2:52 - There is a stumble in saying the word 'habituated' (i.e. i hear 'h-habituated'). Please remove this.
* 5:34 - Please remove the pause between 'as the' and 'fruit'
* 6:28 - Please remove the pause between 'might also be' and 'profitably added'
* 6:53 - Please shorten, if not eliminate, the pause between 'necessary parts' and 'of an'
* 7:07 - Please lengthen the pause, by a bit, between 'both to teachers and pupils' (ending of the previous paragraph) and 'It might also be...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
Once edited, please upload this so I can do spot PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
This sounds much better, though the pause at the 2:36 mark sounds... off. Could you please edit it such that it is around a second long? The pause you did for the 7:07 mark is a perfect example of how long it should be.
Hi Angela! Sure thing. Pause lengthened around 2:36, and time is now 7:51.yannaaragon wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2023, 2:43 amHey Claire!Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 6:06 pmThank you! I've made the requested edits and have re-uploaded the file. Time decreased by one second, so is now 7:50.yannaaragon wrote: ↑November 22nd, 2023, 2:38 am
Hi Claire. Thanks for uploading this section; I've just PL'ed it.
Please edit the file based on my feedback below:
* 0:44 - Please remove the stumble between 'of' and 'friends'
* 2:36 - Please add a short pause between 'afforded' (last word of the previous paragraph) and 'in the first edition...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
* 2:52 - There is a stumble in saying the word 'habituated' (i.e. i hear 'h-habituated'). Please remove this.
* 5:34 - Please remove the pause between 'as the' and 'fruit'
* 6:28 - Please remove the pause between 'might also be' and 'profitably added'
* 6:53 - Please shorten, if not eliminate, the pause between 'necessary parts' and 'of an'
* 7:07 - Please lengthen the pause, by a bit, between 'both to teachers and pupils' (ending of the previous paragraph) and 'It might also be...' (starting phrase of the next paragraph).
Once edited, please upload this so I can do spot PL.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
This sounds much better, though the pause at the 2:36 mark sounds... off. Could you please edit it such that it is around a second long? The pause you did for the 7:07 mark is a perfect example of how long it should be.
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_03_vaux_128kb.mp3
~Channeling my inner condiment while I KETCHUP (thanks for your patience)~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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May I have section 4 please?
~Channeling my inner condiment while I KETCHUP (thanks for your patience)~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Hello! Here is section 4 (8:17).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_04_vaux_128kb.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_04_vaux_128kb.mp3
~Channeling my inner condiment while I KETCHUP (thanks for your patience)~
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
Cheers, Claire
I'm not addicted to reading. I can stop as soon as I finish the next chapter
Come read!
The Boys' Book of Famous Rulers
Great Events in North & South America
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Hi Claire,Cbteddy wrote: ↑December 16th, 2023, 3:41 pm Hello! Here is section 4 (8:17).
https://librivox.org/uploads/alg1001/anthonybenezet_04_vaux_128kb.mp3
Thanks for sending this through. Please see needed edits below:
1:02 please remove stumble / shorten pause betwen 'unbounded' and 'philanthropy'
2:39 please remove stumble / shorten pause betwen 'black' and 'people'
4:28 please shorten pause betwen 'communities' and 'and nations'
7:22 please shorten pause betwen 'religious' and 'welfare'
7:31 please shorten pause betwen 'every' and 'people'. Also, 'people' here sounded like 'preeple'