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Post by HenriettaStrauss »

redrun wrote: October 17th, 2023, 8:17 pm Well, it was a good deal longer than I expected, but here are the first couple chapters of Kurt:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_01.mp3 (6:51)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_02.mp3 (3:54)

I ought to be able to finish the rest by the end of the week. I'll also be around to make adjustments if needed. :wink:
Ok! Thank you.
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The part's PL position is open. Anyone who would like to take this position is greatly appreciated.
Thanks,
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Post by mariechristian »

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:01
Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
length 1:13

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
length 0:56

Marie :D
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mariechristian wrote: October 19th, 2023, 8:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:01
Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
length 1:13

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
length 0:56

Marie :D
Thank you. Everything should be fixed now.
And I have your files ready for PL.
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HenriettaStrauss wrote: October 21st, 2023, 8:05 am
mariechristian wrote: October 19th, 2023, 8:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:01
Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
length 1:13

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
length 0:56

Marie :D
Thank you. Everything should be fixed now.
And I have your files ready for PL.
:thumbs:
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Post by redrun »

Well, here's the rest of Kurt! I also found some errors in the script, though I was watching out specifically for Kurt.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_03.mp3 (10:33)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_04.mp3 (7:27)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_05.mp3 (3:03)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_06.mp3 (0:18)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_07.mp3 (0:39)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_08.mp3 (0:46)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_09.mp3 (1:09)

Chapter 3:
Pg 2, "Yes, the teacher told us twice that we must not forget it," is Lippo's line
Pg 6, "But, Uncle Philip, the song has twelve stanzas, and we have to go to school. Lippo must go, too," is Kurt's line - I've recorded it @0:38
Pg 7, "What can we do? Where is your mother? Why does she run away at such a moment?" is Uncle Phillip's line
Pg 36, "Shall we have the story to-day?" is Kurt's line

Chapter 4:
Pg 19, "I only wonder how she could get hold of such a basket full, you know, without being—you know—" is Lux's line

Chapter 5:
Pg 19, "You must wait now till after lunch, Kurt," is Mrs Maxa's line, as is "for you were rather late to-day."
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redrun wrote: October 21st, 2023, 5:30 pm Well, here's the rest of Kurt! I also found some errors in the script, though I was watching out specifically for Kurt.

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_03.mp3 (10:33)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_04.mp3 (7:27)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_05.mp3 (3:03)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_06.mp3 (0:18)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_07.mp3 (0:39)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_08.mp3 (0:46)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_kurt_09.mp3 (1:09)

Chapter 3:
Pg 2, "Yes, the teacher told us twice that we must not forget it," is Lippo's line
Pg 6, "But, Uncle Philip, the song has twelve stanzas, and we have to go to school. Lippo must go, too," is Kurt's line - I've recorded it @0:38
Pg 7, "What can we do? Where is your mother? Why does she run away at such a moment?" is Uncle Phillip's line
Pg 36, "Shall we have the story to-day?" is Kurt's line

Chapter 4:
Pg 19, "I only wonder how she could get hold of such a basket full, you know, without being—you know—" is Lux's line

Chapter 5:
Pg 19, "You must wait now till after lunch, Kurt," is Mrs Maxa's line, as is "for you were rather late to-day."
Thank you! All fixed.
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Post by victoriaalicebell »

Although I can not part's PL, I can help clear a bit of the MW up.

Beggar Woman is PL OK.
Doctor is PL OK.
Mr. Trius is PL OK.
Mea, chapter 2 is PL OK.
Keratak wrote: September 14th, 2023, 7:13 pm Ch 9: Narrator and Philip (I'm gonna miss him) are done.
Uncle Philip, chapter 9: PL Notes:
0:04: There isn't a long enough space inbetween the "Character, read by your name." part and the first line.
0:20: Please add a space inbetween the lines, "I won't refuse the hand of an old friend, though, Maxa," and "if he offers it to me to reestablish peace. What is he going to do for Salo's son?".
EltonTheSnowman wrote: October 2nd, 2023, 11:59 pm Here's Mea:
Mea, chapter 4, PL Notes:
The reader can decide whether she thinks that this is important enough. In part of the last line, I hear "But she was most offended I told her that it was wrong of her;" when the book says, "But she was most offended because I told her that it was wrong of her;"

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Post by HenriettaStrauss »

victoriaalicebell wrote: October 27th, 2023, 6:36 am Although I can not part's PL, I can help clear a bit of the MW up.

Beggar Woman is PL OK.
Doctor is PL OK.
Mr. Trius is PL OK.
Mea, chapter 2 is PL OK.
Keratak wrote: September 14th, 2023, 7:13 pm Ch 9: Narrator and Philip (I'm gonna miss him) are done.
Uncle Philip, chapter 9: PL Notes:
0:04: There isn't a long enough space inbetween the "Character, read by your name." part and the first line.
0:20: Please add a space inbetween the lines, "I won't refuse the hand of an old friend, though, Maxa," and "if he offers it to me to reestablish peace. What is he going to do for Salo's son?".
EltonTheSnowman wrote: October 2nd, 2023, 11:59 pm Here's Mea:
Mea, chapter 4, PL Notes:
The reader can decide whether she thinks that this is important enough. In part of the last line, I hear "But she was most offended I told her that it was wrong of her;" when the book says, "But she was most offended because I told her that it was wrong of her;"

Thanks,
Thank you so much. I've updated the MW.
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I am also going to help clear up the MW but can not commit to Parts PLing the whole book.
Chapters 6,7 & 8 are PL OK! I especially loved the echo in chapter 6. It sounds so realistic!
Chapter 6 is PL OK!

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Post by EltonTheSnowman »

Going to fix Mea chapter 4 as soon as my voice returns to normal after this annoying cold :D
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I can do Mrs. Knippel for you.

- Hey, I'm wondering if anything has been said about how you'd like us to pronounce her name? It could be a little unfortunate if folks read it as a body part. :lol:

I was thinking it would sound like NipPELL, but I've found that Narrator has read it as Mrs. KaNIPple. I can use that in my voice credit. Maybe we can see if anyone else uses that name and let them know how it's being said?
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thecountess wrote: October 30th, 2023, 5:53 am I am also going to help clear up the MW but can not commit to Parts PLing the whole book.
Chapters 6,7 & 8 are PL OK! I especially loved the echo in chapter 6. It sounds so realistic!
Chapter 6 is PL OK!

~ The Countess
Thank you!
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LCaulkins wrote: October 30th, 2023, 9:03 am I can do Mrs. Knippel for you.

- Hey, I'm wondering if anything has been said about how you'd like us to pronounce her name? It could be a little unfortunate if folks read it as a body part. :lol:

I was thinking it would sound like NipPELL, but I've found that Narrator has read it as Mrs. KaNIPple. I can use that in my voice credit. Maybe we can see if anyone else uses that name and let them know how it's being said?
She's yours. Thank you!

Another reader has pronounced it like "Kippell" if that helps.

Thanks,
Henrietta.
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