[RELIGION/HISTORY] The Shorter Works of Tertullian Volume 2 - tg

bountonw · Post by **bountonw** » October 28th, 2023, 2:02 am

I will do #34.

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » October 28th, 2023, 2:23 am

bountonw wrote: ↑October 28th, 2023, 2:02 am I will do #34.

Thankyou!

bountonw · Post by **bountonw** » October 28th, 2023, 3:23 pm

PL for section 34: This is my first ever PL. Feedback appreciated.

File passes checker.

8:46.5—blow up not blows up
9:22—it is not is it
10:19—that not the
11:32.5—remove three (delete extra word)
11:48.5—deadly not deadliest
12:57.5—in that they have their bliss occurs twice
14:35.5—overcome not come
15:46.5—excites not excite
15:59.5—in not into

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » October 28th, 2023, 11:56 pm

bountonw wrote: ↑October 28th, 2023, 3:23 pm PL for section 34: This is my first ever PL. Feedback appreciated.

File passes checker.

8:46.5—blow up not blows up
9:22—it is not is it
10:19—that not the
11:32.5—remove three (delete extra word)
11:48.5—deadly not deadliest
12:57.5—in that they have their bliss occurs twice
14:35.5—overcome not come
15:46.5—excites not excite
15:59.5—in not into

Great, thankyou! Will get back to you with a spot check soon.

vincentl · Post by **vincentl** » October 29th, 2023, 7:46 pm

Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shorterworks2_09_tertullian_128kb.mp3
27:53

Uploaded and ready for PL

Thanks!

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » October 30th, 2023, 4:01 am

silverquill wrote: https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shorterworks2_23_tertullian_128kb.mp3

Section 23 is PL OK!

Chapter 15 was quite beautiful.

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » October 30th, 2023, 5:14 am

mleigh wrote: ↑October 25th, 2023, 6:37 pm one repeat in section 33:

17:29 and 17:31 are duplicates " in the athletes Greece,"

Thanks,

M

Spot check ready!

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » October 30th, 2023, 5:59 pm

vincentl wrote: https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shorterworks2_09_tertullian_128kb.mp3

Section 9 is PL OK!

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » November 6th, 2023, 4:34 am

bountonw wrote: ↑October 28th, 2023, 3:23 pm PL for section 34: This is my first ever PL. Feedback appreciated.

File passes checker.

8:46.5—blow up not blows up
9:22—it is not is it
10:19—that not the
11:32.5—remove three (delete extra word)
11:48.5—deadly not deadliest
12:57.5—in that they have their bliss occurs twice
14:35.5—overcome not come
15:46.5—excites not excite
15:59.5—in not into

Thanks for the PL! One piece of feedback is that quotation marks make the notes easier to understand

Eg: "that" not "the". It's up to you whether you choose to read along with the text or not.

Spot checks with new timings for section 34
08:46 blow up not blows up
09:21 it is not is it
10:18 that not the
11:32 remove three (delete extra word)
11:48 deadly not deadliest
12:59 in that they have their bliss occurs twice
14:52 overcome not come
15:46 excites not excite
15:59 in not into

bountonw · Post by **bountonw** » November 6th, 2023, 5:43 am

InTheDesert wrote: ↑November 6th, 2023, 4:34 am
Thanks for the PL! One piece of feedback is that quotation marks make the notes easier to understand Eg: "that" not "the". It's up to you whether you choose to read along with the text or not.

Spot checks with new timings for section 34
08:46 blow up not blows up
09:21 it is not is it
10:18 that not the
11:32 remove three (delete extra word)
11:48 deadly not deadliest
12:59 in that they have their bliss occurs twice
14:52 overcome not come
15:46 excites not excite
15:59 in not into

Yes, indeed! My notes were not very clear.

BTW, your editing skills are amazing.

PL OK!

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » November 6th, 2023, 5:47 am

bountonw wrote: ↑November 6th, 2023, 5:43 am Yes, indeed! My notes were not very clear.

BTW, your editing skills are amazing.

PL OK!

Thankyou, marked! I've built up a big set of Audacity macros that makes it a breeze

vincentl · Post by **vincentl** » November 9th, 2023, 6:53 pm

vincentl wrote: ↑October 29th, 2023, 7:46 pm Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shorterworks2_09_tertullian_128kb.mp3
27:53

Uploaded and ready for PL

Thanks!

Can you remove this from PL ready and put it back as Assigned ?

I realized I did not follow the notes with respect to the **** missing text and have a few spots I need to edit. If not and it goes through PL I'm sure that will be flagged and I can fix for Spot Check so no worries.

InTheDesert · Post by **InTheDesert** » November 9th, 2023, 7:48 pm

vincentl wrote: ↑November 9th, 2023, 6:53 pm
vincentl wrote: ↑October 29th, 2023, 7:46 pm Section 9
https://librivox.org/uploads/triciag/shorterworks2_09_tertullian_128kb.mp3
27:53

Uploaded and ready for PL

Thanks!
Can you remove this from PL ready and put it back as Assigned ?

I realized I did not follow the notes with respect to the **** missing text and have a few spots I need to edit. If not and it goes through PL I'm sure that will be flagged and I can fix for Spot Check so no worries.

Just checking, did you actually mean this post in the other project?

vincentl · Post by **vincentl** » November 10th, 2023, 5:56 am

InTheDesert wrote: ↑November 9th, 2023, 7:48 pm Just checking, did you actually mean this post in the other project?

LoL. Yes I did ... sorry.

vincentl · Post by **vincentl** » November 11th, 2023, 10:18 pm

In Section 10 of Against Hermogenese Chapter XIX there are 2 greek words which I am at a loss how to pronounce. I have pasted the sentence below but keep in mind the actual words bolded are actual greek that doesn't cut and paste here. It just shows the problem. The actual text at the end of Chapter XIX, is here https://archive.org/details/antenicenefather03robeuoft/page/488/mode/1up?view=theater

The Greek term for beginning, which is apxy, admits the sense not only of priority of order, but of power as well; whence princes and magistrates are called hpxovreq. Therefore ir this sense too, beginmng may he taken for princely authority and power. It was, indeed, in His transcendent authority and power, that God made the heaven and the earth.

Any advice ?