This is a good first offering, esp. for such a challenging piece of text.
Only one real change, and a couple of comments for your consideration.
-- Your personal attribution, "Read by . . . " should appear either at the beginning OR at the end, but not both. So, choose one and delete the other. "End of Meditation #." [Optional, and if
not stated in the intro: "Read by your name, city, date."]
-- Their is a background hum from the beginning to about 5:17 when is just stops. It is still in the acceptable range, but something you might want to keep in mind. Some noise reduction, getting a noise profile from the first second, might help it.
-- We usually don't comment on pronunciation, but for future reference, the word, "err" rhymes with "her" not "hair." It is a common mispronunciation. No need to change anything here.
Fix the "Read by . . ." and upload the corrected file under the same file name and post the link and time here again.
Again, thank you for an overall impressive reading!