[COMPLETE] The Temple by George Herbert - kaz

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BeccaVO
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YAY!! :clap:
Thanks for all your help!
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https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/mattens_034_herbert_128.mp3
1:15 made some edits, let me know if it needs any other.
Thanks!
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Narratorlife wrote: March 1st, 2023, 9:23 am https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/mattens_034_herbert_128.mp3
1:15 made some edits, let me know if it needs any other.
Thank you for your recording.
The text is correct and well read :thumbs:

A couple of minor points:
- the file name should be thetemple_034_herbert_128kb but I have corrected this for you.
- the volume level of some of the recording is too low. I have amplified these parts so it is now ok here. In future it may be better if you can speak a bit louder or speak close to the microphone or amplify the recording before it is uploaded.

So this can now be marked PL OK! :)
Alan
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Sorry about the file name error. I'll be mindful of volume.

Thanks so much for your edits and helpful hints.

/Narratorlife :)
alanmapstone wrote: March 2nd, 2023, 2:08 am
Narratorlife wrote: March 1st, 2023, 9:23 am https://librivox.org/uploads/kazbek/mattens_034_herbert_128.mp3
1:15 made some edits, let me know if it needs any other.
Thank you for your recording.
The text is correct and well read :thumbs:

A couple of minor points:
- the file name should be thetemple_034_herbert_128kb but I have corrected this for you.
- the volume level of some of the recording is too low. I have amplified these parts so it is now ok here. In future it may be better if you can speak a bit louder or speak close to the microphone or amplify the recording before it is uploaded.

So this can now be marked PL OK! :)
Thanks!
Angela
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Sections 75&158 are both Ready for PL!
Thank you and welcome to LibriVox :wink:
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Hi Alan,

I would like to claim sections 29 and 30.

Thanks,
Bruce.
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brucek wrote: March 14th, 2023, 6:00 pm I would like to claim sections 29 and 30.
Thanks Bruce, sections 29&30 are assigned to you :wink:
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Thanks Bruce, these are Ready for PL!
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Both sections are PL OK! :thumbs:
Thanks Bruce
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PL notes for sections 75 and 158:
The text of both poems is correct :thumbs:
However the volume level of both recordings is too low, for section 75 it is below our minimum required level of 86 dB. I have enhanced the volume of both recordings to bring it close to our preferred level of 89 dB. I have also adjusted the lengths of the start and end silences to those specified in the first post. I have also corrected the filename of section 75. So these sections can now be marked ok!

If I may offer some advice, for future recordings try to make individual words clearer by speaking louder or closer to the microphone. Also try to speak more slowly as this will help make the words clearer. At present it is a bit rushed and garbled. Poetry has its own natural tempo, try to find that.
Best wishes.

PS. Sorry for the delay in this PLing, I have been very busy completing another project.
Alan
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May I take on 57-66, please?
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KevinS wrote: March 21st, 2023, 6:24 am May I take on 57-66, please?
Many thanks Kevin :wink:
Sections assigned.
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