FULL [DR] The Golden Road (The Story Girl #2) by L.M. Montgomery -mtf

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llamaart
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In God I trust.
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ej400 wrote: January 14th, 2023, 8:05 pm Hey there! I have some Felix files!

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felix_05.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felix_06.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_felix_07.mp3

I have more I'll be uploading later tonight as well :D
Thank you so much!
Elijah
Awesome! Thanks, Elijah!
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For Felicity Chapter 4, I have one small note:

1:19
"He can't keep it anyway," (I hear "He can't help it anyway,")



For Felicity Chapter 6, I have two small notes:

4:47 (p. 9) Missing Word: "story"
"They say that story isn't true,"

7:41 (p. 12)
"There was plenty of baking-powder in the pantry," - the first two words got faded out probably during your editing and I can't hear them properly.


Felicity Chapter 5 is PL OK!
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Hi Diego!

I don't hear the correction. It still sounds like Ce-li-ci-ty (as in "Felicity") instead of Ce-ci-ly. :D
benderca wrote: November 9th, 2022, 3:03 am I have one tiny note for Dan Chapter 3:

0:33 (p. 8)
You combine your sisters names - instead of "Cecily," I hear "Ce-licity" (My dad used to always do that with my siblings' and my names... :lol: ).

"If Willy Fraser had had as much spunk as Peter, Miss Cecily King mightn't be so low spirited,"

Thanks!
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Hi Diego,

The corrections aren't here either. I see that you uploaded a new file, but it's still the old version. Can you check your files? Maybe you labeled the corrected version "1" instead of "01"?
benderca wrote: November 9th, 2022, 1:53 am
DiegoT wrote: Sorry that its been a while but here are a couple of chapters:

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_danking_01.mp3

Enjoy!
-Diego T
Great portrayal of Dan, Diego! I love it!

I have some tiny notes for Dan Chapter 1:

Could you please say his whole name in the voice credit at the beginning? "Dan King, read by..."

Right after that at the beginning, could you please add some laughter? (p. 1)

0:24 (p. 3)
EXTRA WORD: "you"

The line reads: "The less work you can get along with the better, in my opinion."
I hear: "The less [YOU] work you can get along with the better, in my opinion.

Thanks,
TJ
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Same here, Diego. It looks like you re-uploaded your first version instead of the corrected version.

Sorry for the trouble...
benderca wrote: November 29th, 2022, 5:04 am I have one tiny note for Dan, Chapter 4:

0:33
You add an "If" at the beginning of this sentence, which changes the meaning:

There are people in this family you've just GOT to quarrel with if you want to live.

(I think it's clear he means Felicity, but you have made Dan much more insightful with the "If" than he probably is -- "if there are people in this family, you have just got to quarrel..." Too true! I like your interpretation! :wink: -- but I don't think Dan is that insightful. :lol: :lol: :lol:)
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Aunt Janet Chapters 3, 4, & 6 are PL OK!
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llamaart wrote: January 11th, 2023, 12:45 pm Here is the fixed Cecily chapter 12. :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_12.mp3
So it sounds like you only corrected the last line at 1:42. I also need you to make the other corrections at 0:24 (p. 2) please:

-- please remove the word "poor"
-- please say "a-u" instead of "u-a"
-- please record "Mr. Marwood" more clearly
-- please add word "it"
-- please say "Ester" instead of "Easter"

"by a man named D-a-u-b-i-g-n-y. I can't pronounce it. I heard Mr. Marwood saying it was a book everyone ought to read, so I began it last Sunday. I brought it along today to read when I got tired picking flowers. I'd ever so much rather have brought Ester Reid.

Thanks, Allie!
benderca wrote: December 12th, 2022, 5:10 am Cecily Chapter 12:

Adorable laugh!!! :lol:

0:24
EXTRA WORD: please remove: "poor"
Also you switched the letters and said "u-a" instead of "a-u"
"Mr. Marwood" is also hard to understand - It sounds like "Miss-em Marmood"
MISSING WORD: "it" (but you can leave this as is, as the meaning is not changed)
PRONUNCIATION: The name "Ester" (short e) sounds like "Easter" (long e)

"by a [poor] man named D-a-u-b-i-g-n-y. I can't pronounce it. I heard Mr. Marwood saying it was a book everyone ought to read, so
I began it last Sunday. I brought it along today to read when I
got tired picking flowers. I'd ever so much rather have brought Ester Reid.


1:42
MISSING WORD: "can"
WORD ORDER: You say "ever were" instead of "were ever"
"I like bacon, but I can never look at a pig without wondering if they were ever intended to be eaten,"

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llamaart wrote: December 7th, 2022, 8:43 am Ok this should be right. Cecily chapter 6.
https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_06.mp3
Thanks, Allie!

Cecily Chapter 6 is PL OK!
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Here is Cecily chapter 12. I don't know how I missed those notes last time :lol: .

https://librivox.org/uploads/mightyfelix/goldenroad_cecilyking_12.mp3
In God I trust.
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Post by benderca »

Kristin, would you also be interested in assisting in the parts PLing?
MrsHand wrote: January 11th, 2023, 8:18 am
benderca wrote: January 9th, 2023, 6:13 pm
Oh, excellent! Yes, that would be wonderful, Kristin! Would you mind also prooflistening my parts as well?

Thanks,
TJ
Can do!
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