First we will go to Section 33. There are a few things that should be looked at.
:28In the House of Representatives April 24 1771 You left of “71” of “1771”
:36.5 of Great Barrington Capt Brown & Capt Darby You added “the” between "of" and "Great". Great Barrington is a place.
:56.5 to both Houses at the Opening of this Session. You said season.
1:45the publick Tranquility of his Majestys Dominions[/i] Left off word Dominions.
2:33.5the Enlargement as well as the Support of those Dominions: Cut off end of “dominions”
2:36.5 And when our natural & constitutional Rights & Liberties, Cut off end of 'Liberties”.
2:40without which no Blessing can be secure to us, End of phrase cut off.
4:10 , & the best Interest of this People End of phrase cut off.
4:55.5 while you shall maintain its fundamental Laws, You said "law". I think it should probably be corrected.
5:22.5On April 3 the House had appointed a committee Phrase cut off.
5:30 Adams was a member of each of these committees. Phrase cut off.
Maybe one more 'run-through' to catch these kind of major errors?
Section 65PLOK Right out of the box.
Section 67: One minor error:
:50 an original draft in the autograph click,click This a duplicate you forgot to cut when editing.
Struggled a little on 33, but great job on 65 and 67.
Hope to hear from you soon,
Wayne
Oh my goodness I don't know what happened there will sort it now and re upload.
Michele When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
There must have been some sort of glitch when uploading or saving on my computer. I have re recorded 33 and it all seems good now. Here is 67 also edited. Many thanks sorry for the trouble.
Michele When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
wib66 wrote: ↑April 4th, 2021, 3:45 am
There must have been some sort of glitch when uploading or saving on my computer. I have re recorded 33 and it all seems good now. Here is 67 also edited. Many thanks sorry for the trouble.
wib66 wrote: ↑April 4th, 2021, 3:45 am
There must have been some sort of glitch when uploading or saving on my computer. I have re recorded 33 and it all seems good now. Here is 67 also edited. Many thanks sorry for the trouble.
Yes, sometimes the 'gremlins are afoot' in technology.
Rerecording of 33 and correction in 67 are great. Both are now PLOK
Keep up the good work.
Wayne
P.S. Accent sounds a little Scouse, but not really. Close?
Edit: Sorry I missed this the first time through. MS stands for Manuscript and MSS is the plural of it. No need to change this, but for future information. This comes up occasionally in readings.
Wayne We never really grow up, we just learn how to act in public.
wib66 wrote: ↑April 4th, 2021, 3:45 am
There must have been some sort of glitch when uploading or saving on my computer. I have re recorded 33 and it all seems good now. Here is 67 also edited. Many thanks sorry for the trouble.
Yes, sometimes the 'gremlins are afoot' in technology.
Rerecording of 33 and correction in 67 are great. Both are now PLOK
Keep up the good work.
Wayne
P.S. Accent sounds a little Scouse, but not really. Close?
Edit: Sorry I missed this the first time through. MS stands for Manuscript and MSS is the plural of it. No need to change this, but for future information. This comes up occasionally in readings.
Thank you for that. It did happen on another file for a different project but haven't found any more since so hopefully that's the last of them. All my family on my mums side are scouse so probably a little hint of it there.
Michele When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Michele When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
Michele When you're having what you feel like is a 'bad day' and then someone comes along out of nowhere and extends to you the simplest of kind gestures, you feel it so deeply within your heart.” ―Miya Yamanouchi
All the water in the world wasn't enough to fix the dry mouth I had going on. Sorry for all the clicks. I tried to noise-reduce them as much as I could.
All the water in the world wasn't enough to fix the dry mouth I had going on. Sorry for all the clicks. I tried to noise-reduce them as much as I could.
Cheers,
-Mark-
Mark,
It happens to all of us. Please don't concern yourself. We are real people and sometimes we get dry mouth.
All the water in the world wasn't enough to fix the dry mouth I had going on. Sorry for all the clicks. I tried to noise-reduce them as much as I could.
Cheers,
-Mark-
Mark,
Great job. In fact, when I started listening I forgot about your comment about 'clicks' until I looked at your post again. I didn't hear any that were noticeable.
Section 28 is PLOK
One comment. In this sentence: "...and the rather, to afford you the opportunity of inserting an address "to the PROTESTANTS of the three Kingdoms, and the COLONIES"; being the preface to a late publication in London,... " you pronounced 'Protestants' like the people who broke off from the Catholic Church. In the context, I think that maybe the word would be pronounced :Pro-TEST-ants. So as to not be confused with the above. To emphasis the "Protest" part of the word. Anyway, just my idea. Of course not worth a change.
Wayne
Wayne We never really grow up, we just learn how to act in public.