Hi Monicha! Thank you for your contribution - I enjoyed listening to this. I'm updating the magic window on your piece to indicate that there are PL notes (just a couple small things!)
00:16 sec - 00:23 sec: I believe you meant to cut the first attempt at your intro statement because you have a very nice version immediately after this truncated one.
Please leave 5 full seconds at the end of your selection - at the present time, there is only 1 second after your last words are spoken.
I know PL's aren't supposed to be the pronunciation police but I saw that our BC had requested that we pronounce the word "PILPAY" as "BIDPA". Since you have to go back in and make the two changes, anyway, it might be an okay time to update that if you want.
Great work!
April