COMPLETE[PLAY]A Woman's Way by Buchanan - thw
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Todd
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sorry for the delay...but I listened to Mrs Blakemore now and it's perfectly PL ok. Nice how you veer between flirty in the beginning, but more subdued later on.WendyKatzHiller wrote: ↑February 26th, 2021, 11:34 amHere's Mrs. Blakemore Act 3.
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_mrsblakemore_3_128kb.mp3
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and everything is in now and PL ok, thank you Michelewib66 wrote: ↑February 27th, 2021, 2:13 pmHere is the edited file for Mrs Belle Morris thanks
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_mrsbellemorris_03_128kb.mp3
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Hi Could I claim the part of Wilson (the butler) please.
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Wilson act 1
ready for PL.
I didn't put it through noise cleaning, I can run it through if you think it needs it?
08:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_wilson_1.mp3
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ready for PL.
I didn't put it through noise cleaning, I can run it through if you think it needs it?
08:29
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_wilson_1.mp3
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When words fail, music speaks.
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Todd
Todd
no I think the background noise is not very audible or disturbing, it's fine like that.qthemusic123 wrote: ↑March 17th, 2021, 8:16 amWilson act 1
ready for PL.
I didn't put it through noise cleaning, I can run it through if you think it needs it?
And WOW, Sue, this was a brilliant performance. I enjoy that the butler for once has a bigger role and is not only announcing people and you do the comedy extremely justice here with your characterisation of Wilson. You really carry the scene on the phone, giving emphasis to every sentence even without hearing the other person on the phone. And the outburst of laughter followed by a half-hearted contrite apology was hilarious and made me chuckle as well. Already looking forward to the rest of Wilson.
Wonderful and PL ok. Thank you !!!
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Thank you for those kind comments.Kitty wrote: ↑March 18th, 2021, 3:50 amno I think the background noise is not very audible or disturbing, it's fine like that.qthemusic123 wrote: ↑March 17th, 2021, 8:16 amWilson act 1
ready for PL.
I didn't put it through noise cleaning, I can run it through if you think it needs it?
And WOW, Sue, this was a brilliant performance. I enjoy that the butler for once has a bigger role and is not only announcing people and you do the comedy extremely justice here with your characterisation of Wilson. You really carry the scene on the phone, giving emphasis to every sentence even without hearing the other person on the phone. And the outburst of laughter followed by a half-hearted contrite apology was hilarious and made me chuckle as well. Already looking forward to the rest of Wilson.
Wonderful and PL ok. Thank you !!!
Sonia
I do try and imagine how I would see the character. Then run through the part a few times ( much to my son's amusement) before volunteering.
Only a few lines on Act 2 and Act 3, so will get to those in a few days.
Sue
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Here are all three acts for Bob Livingstone:
Act One -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_1.mp3
Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_2.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_3.mp3
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Greg
Act One -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_1.mp3
Act Two -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_2.mp3
Act Three -
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_boblivingstone_3.mp3
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Greg
excellent job, Greg ! I was already highly curious how you would portray poor hen-pecked Bob. On the one side he comes across as a bit of a spineless whimp, but then he has his jovial moments. I equally enjoyed the naughty laughs and the embarrassed stammering Wonderfully complex. Thank you
Act 2 is straight PL ok
I have a few notes for the other two acts though:
Act 1:
> at 0:10: (p. 37) between "hello Marion" and "glad to see you" could you leave more space here for the stage directions ? I fear Todd has no fiddling space at all here, let's not make it harder on him than it already is
> at 1:00: (p. 38) "think of your fix !" – if I may make a suggestion to improve the understanding of this line, I would emphasize "your" a bit more here. Marion mentions her husband's fix, so Bob naturally would counter with her fix. If you read the previous sentence it may become more clear to you what I mean. Not sure if I explained it accurately.
Act 3:
> at about 0:07: (p. 119) you forgot the "three men" line, where you are included in the group: "Dare ? Why ... I ... "
> at about 5:26: (p. 155) please insert missed ALL line: "Good-night"
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Thanks, Sonia. I will work on the corrections over the next evening or two. As always, many thanks for your kind feedback!Kitty wrote: ↑March 22nd, 2021, 7:18 amexcellent job, Greg ! I was already highly curious how you would portray poor hen-pecked Bob. On the one side he comes across as a bit of a spineless whimp, but then he has his jovial moments. I equally enjoyed the naughty laughs and the embarrassed stammering Wonderfully complex. Thank you
Act 2 is straight PL ok
I have a few notes for the other two acts though:
Act 1:
> at 0:10: (p. 37) between "hello Marion" and "glad to see you" could you leave more space here for the stage directions ? I fear Todd has no fiddling space at all here, let's not make it harder on him than it already is
> at 1:00: (p. 38) "think of your fix !" – if I may make a suggestion to improve the understanding of this line, I would emphasize "your" a bit more here. Marion mentions her husband's fix, so Bob naturally would counter with her fix. If you read the previous sentence it may become more clear to you what I mean. Not sure if I explained it accurately.
Act 3:
> at about 0:07: (p. 119) you forgot the "three men" line, where you are included in the group: "Dare ? Why ... I ... "
> at about 5:26: (p. 155) please insert missed ALL line: "Good-night"
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Sonia
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Wilson act 2 ready for PL
length 1:43
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_wilson_2_128kb.mp3
length 1:43
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/womansway_wilson_2_128kb.mp3
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