Dear Maria, thank you for the good job! I am glad you want to record more sections, therefore I offering a general suggestion you did not ask for
It looks like you cut every pause from your recording, therefore it does not sound natural. A listener does not hear you breathing and starts worrying
It is okay here, but for future sections please leave pauses between paragraphs, sentences, and direct speech of different characters.
If you wish to continue receiving this sort of suggestions, please write something like "constructive criticism (or CC) welcome." If you don't want to see any CC then do nothing, and I won't bother you
Here is the feedback that needs to be addressed:
Sec.8:
0:0 - the pause at the beginning must be .5 - 1 sec
3:33 "не только
что убить птицу", I hear "не только убить птицу"
4:04 "А игры не будетъ", I hear "А игры никакой не будетъ"
4:13 - the pause at the end must be 5 sec
Sec.9:
0:0 - the pause at the beginning must be .5 - 1 sec
1:15 - 1:25 - the volume gets noticeably lower, please add ~3 dB
3:03 - the pause at the end must be 5 sec
Sec.10:
0:50 - "онъ не могъ", I hear "онъ не cмогъ"
1:40 - "въ отношеніяхъ со всякимъ", I hear "въ отношеніяхъ со всеми"
3:15 - "слезы показывались", I hear "слезы накатывались"
4:45 - the pause at the end must be 5 sec
Sec.11:
0:0 - the pause at the beginning must be .5 - 1 sec
1:00 - "ПапА́," please stress the last syllable, Tolstoy uses it as a French word
2:44 - "въ рукѣ", I hear "въ руках"
3:14 - "ПапА́," please stress the last syllable
3:30 - "точно привязанъ", I hear "тоже привязанъ"
4:58 - "ПапА́", I hear "папой." Does not inflect / не склоняется
5:00 - "всѣ несправедливости", I hear "всѣ справедливости"
6:50 - the pause at the end must be 5 sec
Honestly, you are doing a great job, my first recording was much worse