[ARABIC] كليلة ودمنة (Kalila wa dimna) - annise
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Hello ^^
Here's section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length 9: 45
Here's section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length 9: 45
Thank you, Hourya. You're on a roll!Houryology wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm Hello ^^
Here's section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length 9: 45
Michael
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Hi MichaelKazbek wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 3:17 pmThank you, Hourya. You're on a roll!Houryology wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm Hello ^^
Here's section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length 9: 45
Michael
I'd like to claim section 18
Great! Assigned.
Michael
PL OK Good job!khaledfouad1993 wrote: ↑June 22nd, 2020, 10:57 am Hi,
Here is my recording of section 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_13_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Recording length: 24:51
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Thank you very muchSaraHale wrote: ↑July 4th, 2020, 5:10 amPL OK Good job!khaledfouad1993 wrote: ↑June 22nd, 2020, 10:57 am Hi,
Here is my recording of section 13
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_13_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Recording length: 24:51
Thank you
Khaled Fouad
Khaled Fouad
You've done a good job with this recording. I've a very minor PL notes.Houryology wrote: ↑July 1st, 2020, 3:15 pm Hello ^^
Here's section 21
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length 9: 45
@8:54 to @9:00 - this part is a repeated line. Please remove it.
Could you please leave 5 second of silence at the end of the recording?
I'll listen to the rest of your recordings and get back to you.
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Brilliant recording as always! Again minor PL notes:Houryology wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 2:02 pm Hi
Here's section 22
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length: 12:10
@9:54 to @9:57 repeated line. Please remove it.
@11:03 missed a word فاستخرجتُها
Could you please add 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording?
Thanks!
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
This one is PL OK. You don't have to adjust the silence for this one.Houryology wrote: ↑June 28th, 2020, 6:20 am Hi Sara
Here's section 23
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_23_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 6:18
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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SaraHale wrote: ↑July 18th, 2020, 9:01 amBrilliant recording as always! Again minor PL notes:Houryology wrote: ↑June 29th, 2020, 2:02 pm Hi
Here's section 22
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
recording length: 12:10
@9:54 to @9:57 repeated line. Please remove it.
@11:03 missed a word فاستخرجتُها
Could you please add 5 seconds of silence at the end of the recording?
Thanks!
Thank you Sara ^^
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 12:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 9:40
You're most welcome! (*^_^*)Houryology wrote: ↑July 18th, 2020, 4:58 pm Thank you Sara ^^
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_22_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 12:10
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_21_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 9:40
You have done an AWESOME job with the editing by the way. Well done! Here's your PL OK
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Hey,
You've done an AWESOME job with the editing.
But there is 1-second silence at the end of the recording. Could you please make it 5 seconds of silence? Thanks so much!!
You've done an AWESOME job with the editing.
But there is 1-second silence at the end of the recording. Could you please make it 5 seconds of silence? Thanks so much!!
Houryology wrote: ↑June 27th, 2020, 8:10 amHey Sara ^^SaraHale wrote: ↑June 21st, 2020, 11:19 pmHey Hourya, It's so nice to meet you. I'm so sorry for taking so long to hear your beautiful recording but I had a lot on my plate lately. I have PL notes for you. But feel free to judge what you would like to correct.Houryology wrote: ↑June 12th, 2020, 5:22 pm Hello , here's section 5
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_5_ibnalmuqaffa.mp3
Length 21:49
First the file's name
kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3, yours is missing 0 (as Michael mentioned) but it is also missing "128kb".
I've also noticed your Name under Contributing Artists. We don't add Metadata Tags when we export the files as this is done automatically. Just double-check this part with Michael.
@00:13 - Dot org not نقطة org. I think Dot is a familiar word for native Arabic speakers to hear when they hear a website.
@2:32 - عندما نسبه الى البهائم This part is missed from the recording.
@2:48 - ولا اي نتيجة I hear او instead of ولا
@2:53 - هذا الكتاب فأنه I hear فأن instead of فأنه
@2:53 - استتم I hear استتِم instead of استتَم
@3:36 - أصيب منهُ I hear بها instead of منهُ
@3:49 - في إراحه I hear راحه instead of إراحه
@5:12 - والفطنة I hear الفتنة instead of الفطنة
@5:48 - I hear العقل instead of العاقل
@6:05 - I hear أن مثلهُ instead of كان مثلهُ
@7:21 - اهواءً double-check this one for me.
@9:43 - لا يعلَوَ double-check this one for me.
@12:27 - وعليه the و is unclear for me.
@12:43 - I hear من كن instead of من كُن
@12:51 - I hear ورَب instead of ورُب
@16:39 - missed في in اذا كان في
@17:44 - I hear الذى instead of الثلاثة الذين
@17:48 - I hear فتنازعو instead of فتنازعوه
@20:56 - I hear احدهما instead of احدها
@21:45 - missed saying نهايه الفصل الـ5
I've corrected all the mistakes except from 5:11 الفطنة and 7:21 اهواءً (they sounded right to me)
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
length 21:45
Thank you for your time
Thanks, SaraHale.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
Constructive criticism is always welcome.
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Hi Sara ^^SaraHale wrote: ↑July 19th, 2020, 8:28 pm Hey,
You've done an AWESOME job with the editing.
But there is 1-second silence at the end of the recording. Could you please make it 5 seconds of silence? Thanks so much!!
Houryology wrote: ↑June 27th, 2020, 8:10 amHey Sara ^^SaraHale wrote: ↑June 21st, 2020, 11:19 pm
Hey Hourya, It's so nice to meet you. I'm so sorry for taking so long to hear your beautiful recording but I had a lot on my plate lately. I have PL notes for you. But feel free to judge what you would like to correct.
First the file's name
kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3, yours is missing 0 (as Michael mentioned) but it is also missing "128kb".
I've also noticed your Name under Contributing Artists. We don't add Metadata Tags when we export the files as this is done automatically. Just double-check this part with Michael.
@00:13 - Dot org not نقطة org. I think Dot is a familiar word for native Arabic speakers to hear when they hear a website.
@2:32 - عندما نسبه الى البهائم This part is missed from the recording.
@2:48 - ولا اي نتيجة I hear او instead of ولا
@2:53 - هذا الكتاب فأنه I hear فأن instead of فأنه
@2:53 - استتم I hear استتِم instead of استتَم
@3:36 - أصيب منهُ I hear بها instead of منهُ
@3:49 - في إراحه I hear راحه instead of إراحه
@5:12 - والفطنة I hear الفتنة instead of الفطنة
@5:48 - I hear العقل instead of العاقل
@6:05 - I hear أن مثلهُ instead of كان مثلهُ
@7:21 - اهواءً double-check this one for me.
@9:43 - لا يعلَوَ double-check this one for me.
@12:27 - وعليه the و is unclear for me.
@12:43 - I hear من كن instead of من كُن
@12:51 - I hear ورَب instead of ورُب
@16:39 - missed في in اذا كان في
@17:44 - I hear الذى instead of الثلاثة الذين
@17:48 - I hear فتنازعو instead of فتنازعوه
@20:56 - I hear احدهما instead of احدها
@21:45 - missed saying نهايه الفصل الـ5
I've corrected all the mistakes except from 5:11 الفطنة and 7:21 اهواءً (they sounded right to me)
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
length 21:45
Thank you for your time
Here's section 5
https://librivox.org/uploads/annise/kalilawadimna_05_ibnalmuqaffa_128kb.mp3
Length 21:50
Thank you for listening!
Hourya