COMPLETE [poetry] Songs Before Sunrise by A. C. Swinburne -ck

[aniroo]

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3

This is chapter 6! Clocks in at 14:12. I checked it it should be good to go, but feel free to double check me!

It is really well done, but at about 10:23 there is a noticeable drop in volume. I selected from 10:23 to the end of the section and went to EFFECT>AMPLIFY and amplified it by +3 and it was about the same volume as the beginning. This problem happens to me after I take a short break from recording, only mine is usually much louder as I have rested and have more energy.

once the volume difference is fixed, it is good to go!

thanks,
aniroo

[Mattaghetti]

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3

This is chapter 6! Clocks in at 14:12. I checked it it should be good to go, but feel free to double check me!

It is really well done, but at about 10:23 there is a noticeable drop in volume. I selected from 10:23 to the end of the section and went to EFFECT>AMPLIFY and amplified it by +3 and it was about the same volume as the beginning. This problem happens to me after I take a short break from recording, only mine is usually much louder as I have rested and have more energy.

once the volume difference is fixed, it is good to go!

thanks,
aniroo

Here is the updated one! Should be good to go now then!

I appreciate your listening
https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/songsbeforesunrise_6_swinburne_128kb.mp3

[Carolin]

Thank you both

[aniroo]

Section 6 PL OK

Thanks

aniroo

[Carolin]

Thank you

[PatrickLondon]

Minor problem with 29 On The Downs: I think there's a typo in the original text.

At the top of p. 195 the first line has "health" where I think "heath" is clearly intended:

"Out of pale cliff and sunburnt health,
Out of the low sea curled beneath
In the land’s bending arm embayed,"

The second line seems to demand a rhyme with "beneath", and if that weren't enough, the whole verse seems to me to be meant to echo the second verse of the poem:

"And on the lip’s edge of the down,
Here where the bent-grass burns to brown
In the dry sea-wind, and the heath
Crawls to the cliff-side and looks down,
I watch, and hear beneath
The low tide breathe."

Other online texts have "health", though I think it makes no sense in this context: I have found one online book about Swinburne that quotes it as "heath".

Should I go with my instinct or stick to the printed text we're all using?

[Mattaghetti]

Clocking at 4:15, its section 7!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/on ... _128kb.mp3

Again, ran through checker and proof listened so should be pretty ok!

[Carolin]

Thank you both

Patrick, go for heath. It must be a misprint thank you!

[PatrickLondon]

Here's 29:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/so ... _128kb.mp3

Duration 7:25

[Carolin]

Thank you

[aniroo]

Clocking at 4:15, its section 7!

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/on ... _128kb.mp3

Again, ran through checker and proof listened so should be pretty ok!

Section 7 PL OK Nicely done.

I noticed that the file name was missing the "S" in songsbeforesunrise, it reads
"ongsbeforesunrise" It'll be OK though, no need to re-upload. You'll probably be double checking all your next files

[aniroo]

Here's 29:

https://librivox.org/uploads/carolin/so ... _128kb.mp3

Duration 7:25

PL OK

very lovely, listen, thanks.

Ps. good call on the heath/health

[Carolin]

Thank you

[GregLn]

Hi,

Please can I have 27?

Thanks,

Greg

[Carolin]

Of course, thank you!