[FULL][DR] A Fourth Form Friendship by Angela Brazil - rap

[thecountess]

For Mabel Farrington, Chapter 8, the sentence after 1:29 is not very clear, I would recommend re-recording it: "There are eight characters, so get eight slips of paper, Dora, and we'll write one on each."

Thank you so much for PLing it for me.
I fixed the line in question.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_mabelfarrington_8.mp3
Hopefully it is PL OK now!

~ The Countess

[Rapunzelina]

This works much better! Thanks! PL OK

[thecountess]

This works much better! Thanks! PL OK

Good, thank you!

~ The Countess

[norahnelson]

Here's the missing lines for Agnes:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_agnes_4.mp3

Thank you,

[victoriaalicebell]

Here's the missing lines for Agnes:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_agnes_4.mp3

Thank you,

Thank you!

[thecountess]

Here's the missing lines for Agnes:
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_agnes_4.mp3

Thank you,

Thank you! It is PL OK!

~ The Countess

[Rapunzelina]

And with this, I have final Chapter 4 in the Magic Window, Ready for PL

[mleigh]

And with this, I have final Chapter 4 in the Magic Window, Ready for PL

Excellent. This is PL OK.

M

[mleigh]

I have just uploaded final files for Chapters 6 and 7 in the Magic Window.

Some words have been reversed in one of the sentences which should be corrected so that it makes sense.
14:25 should be " it had never been recorded" instead of " it had been never recorded"

I'll listen to the next chapter tomorrow.

M

[mleigh]

Chapter 7 is PL OK. Well done all.

M

[victoriaalicebell]

I've rerecorded chapter 8. I am using a different mic now. It sounds a lot better.

[victoriaalicebell]

Chapter 9 is in. (Finally). I recorded it when I first recorded chapter 8. It didn't save.

But I redid it. It's now in the mw.

[thecountess]

I've rerecorded chapter 8. I am using a different mic now. It sounds a lot better.

I have only one PL NOTE and it is a picky one.

• At around 1:04 you said "ran her letter" whereas the script says "ran her letter to Aldred"

Since what you said doesn't change the meaning of the text I don't think you need to rerecord that line, but it is up to you whether you think you should rerecord it or not.

Also thank you Rapunzelina for PLing all of those chapters for me.

~ The Countess

[victoriaalicebell]

I've rerecorded chapter 8. I am using a different mic now. It sounds a lot better.

I have only one PL NOTE and it is a picky one.

• At around 1:04 you said "ran her letter" whereas the script says "ran her letter to Aldred"

Since what you said doesn't change the meaning of the text I don't think you need to rerecord that line, but it is up to you whether you think you should rerecord it or not.

Also thank you Rapunzelina for PLing all of those chapters for me.

~ The Countess

If it's ok with you, I'd prefer not to fix it.