[PLAY]Falstaff's Wedding (1760 Version) by Kenrick - thw
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Hi Luminess,
PL Okay for York acts 3 and 5--I'm not sure the line in act 5 is for York since it's marked "Lord" but thanks for recording it! Very nice.
Lora
PL Okay for York acts 3 and 5--I'm not sure the line in act 5 is for York since it's marked "Lord" but thanks for recording it! Very nice.
Lora
Thank you for the extension. Here is Doll:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_doll_1.mp3
1:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_doll_2.mp3
2:03
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_doll_1.mp3
1:45
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_doll_2.mp3
2:03
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Hi Jenn,
PL Okay for Doll Act 1. In Act 2 at :33 after "...my sweet knight" and before "Why, how came you..." please add a missing line: "But, will you give me a new kirtle at Bartlemew fair?"
Thanks,
Lora
PL Okay for Doll Act 1. In Act 2 at :33 after "...my sweet knight" and before "Why, how came you..." please add a missing line: "But, will you give me a new kirtle at Bartlemew fair?"
Thanks,
Lora
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Thank you.
Todd
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Hi Ehsan,
Your recording sounds very good! I do have a few notes for you; please review, make changes, and ask if you have any questions.
Act 1:
at 1:14 please change "flare" to "share" in "...inns of the court should share the money..."
at 1:17 please change the pronunciation from "belied" with a long "i" sound to "bellied" which refers to Falstaff's belly/stomach.
Act 2:
at 1:33 after "...borrowed of me..." and before "Oh! that I ever did..." add a line that I believe is Shallow's even though the abbreviation is different (SHALL) instead of (SHAL): "Fiddle, faddle, Sir John...worth a farthing."
Act 4:
:25 please change "belied" to "bellied" (See note above) in "tun-bellied knave..."
:57 change "feeing" to "seeing" in "...pass without seeing us."
at 3:58 add Shallow's next speech, which is in Scene 13--SHALLOW, Solus: "The devil...pay for making me an ass!"
Thanks,
Lora
Your recording sounds very good! I do have a few notes for you; please review, make changes, and ask if you have any questions.
Act 1:
at 1:14 please change "flare" to "share" in "...inns of the court should share the money..."
at 1:17 please change the pronunciation from "belied" with a long "i" sound to "bellied" which refers to Falstaff's belly/stomach.
Act 2:
at 1:33 after "...borrowed of me..." and before "Oh! that I ever did..." add a line that I believe is Shallow's even though the abbreviation is different (SHALL) instead of (SHAL): "Fiddle, faddle, Sir John...worth a farthing."
Act 4:
:25 please change "belied" to "bellied" (See note above) in "tun-bellied knave..."
:57 change "feeing" to "seeing" in "...pass without seeing us."
at 3:58 add Shallow's next speech, which is in Scene 13--SHALLOW, Solus: "The devil...pay for making me an ass!"
Thanks,
Lora
Thanks! Here is the missing line. Not sure where it went in the original file because I distinctly remember having to record it multiple times to get it rightADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 11th, 2023, 5:17 pm Hi Jenn,
PL Okay for Doll Act 1. In Act 2 at :33 after "...my sweet knight" and before "Why, how came you..." please add a missing line: "But, will you give me a new kirtle at Bartlemew fair?"
Thanks,
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_doll_2.mp3
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Thank you.
Todd
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Great, Jenn-thanks and PL Okay.
L.
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Here you goADKreader1122 wrote: ↑December 12th, 2023, 12:22 pm Hi Ehsan,
Your recording sounds very good! I do have a few notes for you; please review, make changes, and ask if you have any questions.
Act 1:
at 1:14 please change "flare" to "share" in "...inns of the court should share the money..."
at 1:17 please change the pronunciation from "belied" with a long "i" sound to "bellied" which refers to Falstaff's belly/stomach.
Act 2:
at 1:33 after "...borrowed of me..." and before "Oh! that I ever did..." add a line that I believe is Shallow's even though the abbreviation is different (SHALL) instead of (SHAL): "Fiddle, faddle, Sir John...worth a farthing."
Act 4:
:25 please change "belied" to "bellied" (See note above) in "tun-bellied knave..."
:57 change "feeing" to "seeing" in "...pass without seeing us."
at 3:58 add Shallow's next speech, which is in Scene 13--SHALLOW, Solus: "The devil...pay for making me an ass!"
Thanks,
Lora
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_justiceshallow_1.mp3 1:39
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_justiceshallow_2.mp3 2:51
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/falstaffswedding1760version_justiceshallow_4.mp3 4:30
Loved that verse at the end
I loved reading him. I met the character first in the Hollow Crown series and I had liked the poor old man very much.
Cheeers.
Thank you.
Todd
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Well done, Eshan--you have great expression! Thank you for making the changes. PL Okay for all acts.
Lora
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Sorry for spelling your first name incorrectly!
Lord Scroop awaits PL in the MW. Vile creature.
Thanks, Todd
Thanks, Todd
Here's Eleanor Poins, Quondam Mistress to the King, Act 5:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/alstaffswedding1760version_eleanor_5.mp3
(I will post Act 3 in the next couple of days, if that's alright).
Thanks,
TJ
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/alstaffswedding1760version_eleanor_5.mp3
(I will post Act 3 in the next couple of days, if that's alright).
Thanks,
TJ