Amandaleung wrote: ↑October 1st, 2023, 4:05 pm
Hi Winnifred,
Thank you for for the helpful feedback! I have corrected my microphone settings and slowed down my reading and I have redone chapter 22. Please PL this version to replace the one sent previously, and let me know if anything has not been addressed.
Yes, that's much much better! Delightfully read and PL OK.
Cheers,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
"Read as many books as you can. Choose courage over caution. Take time to visit libraries. Look for light in the darkness. Have faith in yourself. Know that love is what matters most."
— Alice Hoffman (The Book of Magic)
"Read as many books as you can. Choose courage over caution. Take time to visit libraries. Look for light in the darkness. Have faith in yourself. Know that love is what matters most."
— Alice Hoffman (The Book of Magic)
Chapters 25 and 26 are very nicely read and both PL OK.
Cheers,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
"Read as many books as you can. Choose courage over caution. Take time to visit libraries. Look for light in the darkness. Have faith in yourself. Know that love is what matters most."
— Alice Hoffman (The Book of Magic)
"Read as many books as you can. Choose courage over caution. Take time to visit libraries. Look for light in the darkness. Have faith in yourself. Know that love is what matters most."
— Alice Hoffman (The Book of Magic)
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
"Read as many books as you can. Choose courage over caution. Take time to visit libraries. Look for light in the darkness. Have faith in yourself. Know that love is what matters most."
— Alice Hoffman (The Book of Magic)
Nicely done. Chapters 28, 29 and 30 are all PL OK!
Cheers,
Winnifred
Readers Wanted: Where the Blue Begins by Christopher Morley (humorous novel about a "Synthetic Hound" named Haphazard Gissing I.) Potemkin Village by Fletcher Pratt (science fiction novelet)
Hello!
Apologies for disappearing for two months. I'm realizing that this isn't really a feasible hobby to commit to during the school year. Hopefully I'll be able to try again over summer break when I don't have classes to prep for...
All that to say, I'm going to release my claim on Chapter 3.
~ Ellie "A word after a word after a word is power." – Margaret Atwood
Hello!
Apologies for disappearing for two months. I'm realizing that this isn't really a feasible hobby to commit to during the school year. Hopefully I'll be able to try again over summer break when I don't have classes to prep for...
All that to say, I'm going to release my claim on Chapter 3.