~ OPEN [DR] Maezli: A Story of the Swiss Valleys, by Johanna Spyri - rap

[thecountess]

OK here is Mrs Maxa Chapter 1... it's 5:56 in length

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_mrsmaxa_1.mp3

I have one PL NOTE for your recording:

• At around 0:31 you forgot to add a 3 to 5 second space in between these two lines:
  • Mrs. Maxa:"Kurt, can't you stop talking about this story? It is only an invention of people who are not contented with one misfortune but must make up an added terror,"
    &
    Mrs. Maxa:"You know, Kurt, that I feel sorry about this foolish tale and want you to pay no attention to it."

Besides that it is a good recording!

~ The Countess

[thecountess]

Here are Maezli in chapter 3-6.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_03.mp3 (0:40)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_04.mp3 (0:20)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_05.mp3 (0:30)

Maezli, chapters 6, 7, 8, and 9.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_6.mp3 - 0:34
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_7.mp3 - 4:24
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_8.mp3 - 7:58
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_9.mp3 - 0:46

Chapters 3,5,6,7, and 8 are PL OK!

I have just one PL NOTE for chapter 4:

• You are missing one line:
  • "Why does something horrible always happen when Mrs. Knippel comes?" (This would probably go in around 0:06)

I also have two PL NOTES for chapter 9:

• You are missing two lines in this recording:
  • God, Who disposes all things well,
    I want but what Thou givest me.
    Oh how can we Thine acts foretell,
    When Thou are far more wise than we?
  &
  • "Salo, Salo, Salo!"

Henrietta, I noticed a line in Chapter 4 that was meant to be voiced by Maezli, Mea, and Loneli when they were not meant to be there.
It is this line - Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
Victoria didn't say this line in her recording.

~ The Countess

[HenriettaStrauss]

Henrietta, I noticed a line in Chapter 4 that was meant to be voiced by Maezli, Mea, and Loneli when they were not meant to be there.
It is this line - Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
Victoria didn't say this line in her recording.

~ The Countess

I'm not sure who it is meant to be read by. What do you think?

[thecountess]

Henrietta, I noticed a line in Chapter 4 that was meant to be voiced by Maezli, Mea, and Loneli when they were not meant to be there.
It is this line - Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
Victoria didn't say this line in her recording.

~ The Countess

I'm not sure who it is meant to be read by. What do you think?

Probably all of these people: Max, Hans, Simi, Stoffi, Clevi, and Rudi.
I think that there might be some more people meant to be saying it though. Maybe less.

~ The Countess

[Dustin]

Here is Chapter 9 for Apollonie (with apologies for the delay!)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_9.mp3

6:45

[HenriettaStrauss]

I have a PL NOTE for chapter 2 (you may not have to fix depending on what BC Henrietta says) :
In the very beginning of the recording you say "Narrator read by...." this is only meant to be in the beginning of Chapter 1. But this is really up to Henrietta. What do you think Henrietta? This would be the only PL NOTE.

I also noticed that there was a line that was meant to be spoken by Maezli but was instead marked for Uncle Philip. It was this line: Uncle Philip: "This is for mother for her mending" Mäzli called out looking with suspense at her uncle's fingers.

~ The Countess

I think that the editor could edit it out.

[HenriettaStrauss]

Here is Chapter 9 for Apollonie (with apologies for the delay!)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_9.mp3

6:45

Thank you!

[thecountess]

I have a PL NOTE for chapter 2 (you may not have to fix depending on what BC Henrietta says) :
In the very beginning of the recording you say "Narrator read by...." this is only meant to be in the beginning of Chapter 1. But this is really up to Henrietta. What do you think Henrietta? This would be the only PL NOTE.

I also noticed that there was a line that was meant to be spoken by Maezli but was instead marked for Uncle Philip. It was this line: Uncle Philip: "This is for mother for her mending" Mäzli called out looking with suspense at her uncle's fingers.

~ The Countess

I think that the editor could edit it out.

Okay, good!

~ The Countess

[thecountess]

Here is Chapter 9 for Apollonie (with apologies for the delay!)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_9.mp3

6:45

You did a great job reading Apollonie!
Chapters 1,2,4,8,& 9 of Apollonie are all PL OK!

I have only one PL NOTE for chapter 7. But if BC Henrietta thinks that the editor would be fine doing this you may not have to fix it:

• You have 3 lines which are read out of order. They should go in at around 8:04:
  • "Yes, the poor child eats like a little bird,"
  • "but Mrs. Rector says that there must be things to choose from in order to tempt her. How is she getting along, doctor? Do you think she'll get well again? Isn't she just like a little angel?"
  • "Indeed I have. I really have,"

You will find those three lines in this time frame 8:15-8:50.
What do you think Henrietta?

Also I found a line in Chapter 8 that was assigned to Apollonie when it was meant to be Mr. Trius's line.
Apollonie: "He receives no letters from these parts."

~ The Countess

[HenriettaStrauss]

Here is Chapter 9 for Apollonie (with apologies for the delay!)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_9.mp3

6:45

You did a great job reading Apollonie!
Chapters 1,2,4,8,& 9 of Apollonie are all PL OK!

I have only one PL NOTE for chapter 7. But if BC Henrietta thinks that the editor would be fine doing this you may not have to fix it:

• You have 3 lines which are read out of order. They should go in at around 8:04:
  • "Yes, the poor child eats like a little bird,"
  • "but Mrs. Rector says that there must be things to choose from in order to tempt her. How is she getting along, doctor? Do you think she'll get well again? Isn't she just like a little angel?"
  • "Indeed I have. I really have,"

You will find those three lines in this time frame 8:15-8:50.
What do you think Henrietta?

I think that to make the editor's job a whole lot easier, the reader should fix it. It's up to you.

Thanks again for doing a bunch of the PLing! I don't have a lot of time to do it myself.

[thecountess]

I think that to make the editor's job a whole lot easier, the reader should fix it. It's up to you.

Thanks again for doing a bunch of the PLing! I don't have a lot of time to do it myself.

I agree..the editors job is already rather large!
Your welcome! It's has been nice to coming along and PLing a little bit here and there.

~ The Countess

[thecountess]

Here's Chapter 8 for Mr. Trius:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_trius_8.mp3 48 seconds

Here's Chapter 9 for Mr. Trius:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_trius_9.mp3 8 seconds

That's all for me for this project! I look forward to listening to the completed audiobook.

They are both PL OK!

~ The Countess

[Dustin]

Fixed! I will have to proof-edit myself a bit more closely! Thank you both <3

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_7.mp3
9:17

Here is Chapter 9 for Apollonie (with apologies for the delay!)

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_9.mp3

6:45

You did a great job reading Apollonie!
Chapters 1,2,4,8,& 9 of Apollonie are all PL OK!

I have only one PL NOTE for chapter 7. But if BC Henrietta thinks that the editor would be fine doing this you may not have to fix it:

• You have 3 lines which are read out of order. They should go in at around 8:04:
  • "Yes, the poor child eats like a little bird,"
  • "but Mrs. Rector says that there must be things to choose from in order to tempt her. How is she getting along, doctor? Do you think she'll get well again? Isn't she just like a little angel?"
  • "Indeed I have. I really have,"

You will find those three lines in this time frame 8:15-8:50.
What do you think Henrietta?

I think that to make the editor's job a whole lot easier, the reader should fix it. It's up to you.

Thanks again for doing a bunch of the PLing! I don't have a lot of time to do it myself.

[thecountess]

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:01
Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
length 1:13

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
length 0:56

Marie

Chapters 5, 7, & 9 of Loneli are PL OK!

There is one PL NOTE for Chapter 4:

• You are missing one line.
  • Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"

~ The Countess

[thecountess]

Fixed! I will have to proof-edit myself a bit more closely! Thank you both <3

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_appollonie_7.mp3
9:17

Thank you! It is PL OK!

~ The Countess