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thecountess wrote: December 11th, 2023, 1:33 pm
mariechristian wrote: October 19th, 2023, 8:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
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Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
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https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
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Marie :D
Chapters 5, 7, & 9 of Loneli are PL OK! :mrgreen:

There is one PL NOTE for Chapter 4:
  • You are missing one line.
    • Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
~ The Countess
Thanks! I'll correct that within a week.
Maria☺️
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mariechristian wrote: December 11th, 2023, 7:48 pm Thanks! I'll correct that within a week.
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Okay, thank you! :thumbs:

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Post by damienle »

Here are Bruno's lines for Chapter 1 & 3:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_bruno_1.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_bruno_3.mp3

Bruno is not listed in chapter 1, but is listed in chapter 2. He's in chapter 1 and not in 2 on the script though.
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mariechristian wrote: December 11th, 2023, 7:48 pm
thecountess wrote: December 11th, 2023, 1:33 pm
mariechristian wrote: October 19th, 2023, 8:31 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:01
Found a tiny mistake in script: top of page 4 reads "Lonely:" instead of "Loneli:"


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_5.mp3
length 3:19
Found one more mistake: near bottom of page 8 reads "Loneli:"Of what? That is easily said-of what!...." This is Clevi's line, not Loneli's


https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_7.mp3
length 1:13

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_9.mp3
length 0:56

Marie :D
Chapters 5, 7, & 9 of Loneli are PL OK! :mrgreen:

There is one PL NOTE for Chapter 4:
  • You are missing one line.
    • Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
~ The Countess
Thanks! I'll correct that within a week.
Maria☺️
Here is corrected Loneli Chapter 4 :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:08

Marei :D
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Post by victoriaalicebell »

Updates to Maezli chapters 4 and 9.
I found an error in the filename for chapter 9, so I'll put it here: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_09.mp3
Thanks,
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victoriaalicebell wrote: January 14th, 2024, 11:38 am Updates to Maezli chapters 4 and 9.
I found an error in the filename for chapter 9, so I'll put it here: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_09.mp3
Thanks,
Awesome. Thanks.
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mariechristian wrote: January 8th, 2024, 1:00 pm
mariechristian wrote: December 11th, 2023, 7:48 pm
thecountess wrote: December 11th, 2023, 1:33 pm
Chapters 5, 7, & 9 of Loneli are PL OK! :mrgreen:

There is one PL NOTE for Chapter 4:
  • You are missing one line.
    • Mea, Loneli, Mäzli: "They were afraid, they were afraid,"
~ The Countess
Thanks! I'll correct that within a week.
Maria☺️
Here is corrected Loneli Chapter 4 :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:08

Marei :D
Hi! Just wanted to remind you that I corrected Loneli Chap 4. It still says See PL Notes in MW
Marie :)
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mariechristian wrote: February 5th, 2024, 4:46 pm
mariechristian wrote: January 8th, 2024, 1:00 pm
mariechristian wrote: December 11th, 2023, 7:48 pm

Thanks! I'll correct that within a week.
Maria☺️
Here is corrected Loneli Chapter 4 :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:08

Marei :D
Hi! Just wanted to remind you that I corrected Loneli Chap 4. It still says See PL Notes in MW
Marie :)
Sorry, I'll fix it. PL OK!
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Keratak wrote: September 4th, 2023, 10:52 am Uncle Philip Ch 3.
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_Philip_03.mp3 2:50
This is PL OK.
Optionally you could take out the chapter introduction which the narrator says, but could be easily taken out by the editor.
Last edited by HenriettaStrauss on February 7th, 2024, 1:06 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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victoriaalicebell wrote: January 14th, 2024, 11:38 am Updates to Maezli chapters 4 and 9.
I found an error in the filename for chapter 9, so I'll put it here: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_maezli_09.mp3
Thanks,
PL OK :thumbs:
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HenriettaStrauss wrote: February 7th, 2024, 12:33 pm
mariechristian wrote: February 5th, 2024, 4:46 pm
mariechristian wrote: January 8th, 2024, 1:00 pm

Here is corrected Loneli Chapter 4 :D
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/maezli_loneli_4.mp3
length 1:08

Marei :D
Hi! Just wanted to remind you that I corrected Loneli Chap 4. It still says See PL Notes in MW
Marie :)
Sorry, I'll fix it. PL OK!
:thumbs:
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Hi is there a description of the characters? I'm trying to decide if Lippo might be a good fit for me. And how are the names pronounced?
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ShellyW wrote: February 20th, 2024, 7:51 am Hi is there a description of the characters? I'm trying to decide if Lippo might be a good fit for me. And how are the names pronounced?
I don't have a character description section. Which names specifically?
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