Thank you for the feedback! I was wondering in general how long pauses like these should be, so this is helpful. Let me know if these work:lomond wrote: ↑July 3rd, 2023, 12:31 amGreetings -
Just two little edits keep both of these sections from being PL OK.
TIME: 00:33 (Section 17) and 00:39 (Section 18) COMMENT: There are long pauses here that need to be shortened to about 1.5 seconds.
Other than those, both sections easily qualify as PL OK.
Lomond
Section 17 (05:33):
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/certo_17_generalfoodscorporation_128kb.mp3
Section 18 (05:50):
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/certo_18_generalfoodscorporation_128kb.mp3