[FULL][DR] A Fourth Form Friendship by Angela Brazil - rap

[victoriaalicebell]

Ursula Bramley here, reporting for duty.

Some things to note: audio is spaced out with about 5 seconds in between, and this is my first time working on a dramatic work so if there is something you need me to change or you have helpful feedback please do let me know. Thanks! Below we have:

Chapter 2 (5:53)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_02.mp3

Chapter 4 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_04.mp3

Chapter 7 (0:54)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_07.mp3

Chapter 8 (1:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_08.mp3

Chapter 9 (1:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_09.mp3

Chapter 10 (2:07)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_10.mp3

Chapter 11 (1:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_11.mp3

Chapter 15 (0:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_15.mp3

Chapter 16 (2:13)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_16.mp3

All of the chapters above with the exception of 9 & 16 are PL OK! You did a great job!

I have one PL NOTE for Chapter 9:

• You are missing one line:
  • "Splendid!"
  This would go in at around 0:15

I have one PL NOTE for Chapter 16:

• At around 1:28 you repeat the line: "But why shouldn't there be a mutual exchange of schools?"

By the way Victoria, Ursula does not have any lines inside of Chapter 15 so Dorotli read Chapter 12 instead. Would the filename be a problem?

~ The Countess

Probably. Dorotli, would you mind fixing it?
Thanks,

[victoriaalicebell]

It is PL OK!
And thanks for noticing my mistake.

~ The Countess

Just a note that I think you forgot to mark it PL OK in the MW

My bad.

[mummibee]

I'd be happy to take the part of Esther Vaudrey!

[victoriaalicebell]

I'd be happy to take the part of Esther Vaudrey!

Welcome aboard! She's yours!

[victoriaalicebell]

Hi, I don't see any lines for Miss Webb in Chapter 11.

Sorry about that. I've fixed it now.

[victoriaalicebell]

Notes on chapter 1.

Volume needs to drop: around -12 dB would put it right on target at 89 dB, but it needs to be between 86 and 92 dB.

Some of the pauses are too long between the voice of someone saying something and the "s/he said" for example. I have only indicated the ones where this was longer than one second.
1:26
2:47
3:21
3:45
8:51
29:47
29:49

Additionally,
5:37 pause should be shortened here, especially as there is no punctuation between the words

11:25 should be "Miss" not "Mrs." in "Miss Drummond is a perfect dear" - I don't believe many married ladies would have taught at a boarding school in the early days of the 20th century. Suggesting this as it is an easy fix to remove the last syllable of "Mrs."

Thanks,

M

It should be fixed now.
Thanks,

[brownrottger]

Here is Miss Webb:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_misswebb_12.mp3 1:33

[Rapunzelina]

Final Chapter 2 is in the Magic Window, Ready for PL!

[Rapunzelina]

Final Chapter 3 is up and in the Magic Window!

[Rapunzelina]

Working on Chapter 4. We're missing the part of Dora Maxwell; it's not in the Magic Window. You'll need to reach out to Elsie and see if she's available to record it.

Also the script is missing a line "But mayn't we help to bring in the things?" which is by one of the five guests (Ursula, Lorna, Agnes, Phœbe or Myfanwy, you can decide which!)

Everything else is in place!


And so I am caught up with editing, as I see we're waiting for at least one character in Chapter 5, and narration for Chapter 6 onwards

[victoriaalicebell]

Working on Chapter 4. We're missing the part of Dora Maxwell; it's not in the Magic Window. You'll need to reach out to Elsie and see if she's available to record it.

Also the script is missing a line "But mayn't we help to bring in the things?" which is by one of the five guests (Ursula, Lorna, Agnes, Phœbe or Myfanwy, you can decide which!)

Everything else is in place!


And so I am caught up with editing, as I see we're waiting for at least one character in Chapter 5, and narration for Chapter 6 onwards

Okay! Oops, I'll fix it. I believe the line belongs to Agnes. I'll double check.
Thanks for editing!

[elsieselwyn]

Here's Dora Maxwell Chapter 4: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_doramaxwell_4.mp3 (5:30)

[victoriaalicebell]

Here's Dora Maxwell Chapter 4: https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_doramaxwell_4.mp3 (5:30)

Thank you!

[Rapunzelina]

Dora Chapter 4 is PL OK and spliced into the master file for Chapter 4. The only thing missing now is the line "But mayn't we help to bring in the things?"
Victoria, would it work if you recorded that as Lorna? or who's recording that?

[victoriaalicebell]

Dora Chapter 4 is PL OK and spliced into the master file for Chapter 4. The only thing missing now is the line "But mayn't we help to bring in the things?"
Victoria, would it work if you recorded that as Lorna? or who's recording that?

I'm Lorna. I really need to get back to this. Will try to have her completed by tonight.