[FULL][DR] A Fourth Form Friendship by Angela Brazil - rap
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Thank you for the feedback, M!
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
It sounds perfectly natural. Chapter 2 is now PL OK.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 1:27 pm Thank you for the feedback, M!
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
Thanks,
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I've finally finished the narrator chapter 6.
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Chapter 7 is in too!
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Well done! Just a few PL notes:
0:42 missing line "cried the purser, coming round at this critical moment to collect the fares, and holding out his hand in anticipation."
4:29 phrase sounds cut-off "where the cliffs were of a different geological formation"
5:15 word substitution "carry some specimens back to the Grange" read as species.
6:07 phrase sounds cut-off "and investigating such a number of species, that the other girls began"
13:50 missing line "she cried, shaking them eagerly."
missing "End of Chapter 6"
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PL notes:
this is optional, at 7:43 the word "sang-froid" has French roots and it's best pronounced as "san-frwa"
at 15:07, missing "English communication"
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Chapter 6 has been updated.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑March 29th, 2024, 4:27 amWell done! Just a few PL notes:
0:42 missing line "cried the purser, coming round at this critical moment to collect the fares, and holding out his hand in anticipation."
4:29 phrase sounds cut-off "where the cliffs were of a different geological formation"
5:15 word substitution "carry some specimens back to the Grange" read as species.
6:07 phrase sounds cut-off "and investigating such a number of species, that the other girls began"
13:50 missing line "she cried, shaking them eagerly."
missing "End of Chapter 6"
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I've fixed chapter 7. Chapter 8 is in the MW.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑April 10th, 2024, 4:13 pmPL notes:
this is optional, at 7:43 the word "sang-froid" has French roots and it's best pronounced as "san-frwa"
at 15:07, missing "English communication"
Thanks,
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Chapter 6 and 7: Check OK!
For Chapter 8, PL notes:
Include "Chapter 8, Amateur Theatricals" just after the disclaimer at 0:12
missing "run her letter to Aldred" at current 0:57
missing at current 8:28 "remonstrated Aldred." and "retorted Lorna, rather resentful of so much interference."
For Chapter 8, PL notes:
Include "Chapter 8, Amateur Theatricals" just after the disclaimer at 0:12
missing "run her letter to Aldred" at current 0:57
missing at current 8:28 "remonstrated Aldred." and "retorted Lorna, rather resentful of so much interference."
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For Mabel Farrington, Chapter 8, the sentence after 1:29 is not very clear, I would recommend re-recording it: "There are eight characters, so get eight slips of paper, Dora, and we'll write one on each."
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I have just uploaded final files for Chapters 6 and 7 in the Magic Window.
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You're fast!Rapunzelina wrote: ↑Yesterday, 2:48 pm I have just uploaded final files for Chapters 6 and 7 in the Magic Window.
Sorry about the delay on my part. I'll try to get more chapters out each day (hopefully).
Thanks,