[FULL][DR] A Fourth Form Friendship by Angela Brazil - rap

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elsieselwyn
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Post by elsieselwyn »

thecountess wrote: December 13th, 2023, 10:47 am It is PL OK! :thumbs:
And thanks for noticing my mistake. :D

~ The Countess
Just a note that I think you forgot to mark it PL OK in the MW :D
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Both of them are PL OK! :clap:

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Ursula Bramley here, reporting for duty.

Some things to note: audio is spaced out with about 5 seconds in between, and this is my first time working on a dramatic work so if there is something you need me to change or you have helpful feedback please do let me know. Thanks! Below we have:

Chapter 2 (5:53)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_02.mp3

Chapter 4 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_04.mp3

Chapter 7 (0:54)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_07.mp3

Chapter 8 (1:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_08.mp3

Chapter 9 (1:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_09.mp3

Chapter 10 (2:07)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_10.mp3

Chapter 11 (1:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_11.mp3

Chapter 15 (0:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_15.mp3

Chapter 16 (2:13)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_16.mp3
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Dorotli wrote: January 9th, 2024, 6:49 pm Ursula Bramley here, reporting for duty.

Some things to note: audio is spaced out with about 5 seconds in between, and this is my first time working on a dramatic work so if there is something you need me to change or you have helpful feedback please do let me know. Thanks! Below we have:

Chapter 2 (5:53)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_02.mp3

Chapter 4 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_04.mp3

Chapter 7 (0:54)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_07.mp3

Chapter 8 (1:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_08.mp3

Chapter 9 (1:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_09.mp3

Chapter 10 (2:07)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_10.mp3

Chapter 11 (1:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_11.mp3

Chapter 15 (0:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_15.mp3

Chapter 16 (2:13)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_16.mp3
Good work! I'll update the MW directly.
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Post by victoriaalicebell »

Salvationist wrote: January 10th, 2024, 4:50 pm Here is Pritchard with the missing line:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_pritchard_15.mp3 1:33
Thank you!
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Post by victoriaalicebell »

Stunning wrote: January 10th, 2024, 7:23 pm Miss Bardsley chpt 16
duration-- 02:44

Miss Bardsley chpt 17
duration-- 02:01



https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_missbardsley_16.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_missbardsley_17.mp3
Sounds lovely!
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Post by VOjamie »

Hi

May I claim the role of Myfanwy?

I hope a Welsh accent is not needed :D I can only say the name, and that's the extent of my Welsh accent.
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Post by victoriaalicebell »

VOjamie wrote: January 11th, 2024, 10:22 pm Hi

May I claim the role of Myfanwy?

I hope a Welsh accent is not needed :D I can only say the name, and that's the extent of my Welsh accent.
Great to have you with us! She's yours.
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Salvationist wrote: January 10th, 2024, 4:50 pm Here is Pritchard with the missing line:

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_pritchard_15.mp3 1:33
Thanks, it is PL OK!

~ The Countess
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Stunning wrote: January 10th, 2024, 7:23 pm Miss Bardsley chpt 16
duration-- 02:44

Miss Bardsley chpt 17
duration-- 02:01



https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_missbardsley_16.mp3

https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_missbardsley_17.mp3
They are both PL OK!
By the way you did a wonderful job reading both of the chapters! You made it seem as if you really were terrified! :clap: :D

~ The Countess
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Dorotli wrote: January 9th, 2024, 6:49 pm Ursula Bramley here, reporting for duty.

Some things to note: audio is spaced out with about 5 seconds in between, and this is my first time working on a dramatic work so if there is something you need me to change or you have helpful feedback please do let me know. Thanks! Below we have:

Chapter 2 (5:53)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_02.mp3

Chapter 4 (1:24)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_04.mp3

Chapter 7 (0:54)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_07.mp3

Chapter 8 (1:23)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_08.mp3

Chapter 9 (1:00)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_09.mp3

Chapter 10 (2:07)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_10.mp3

Chapter 11 (1:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_11.mp3

Chapter 15 (0:48)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_15.mp3

Chapter 16 (2:13)
https://librivox.org/uploads/rapunzelina/fourthformfriendship_ursula_16.mp3
All of the chapters above with the exception of 9 & 16 are PL OK! :clap: You did a great job!

I have one PL NOTE for Chapter 9:
  • You are missing one line:
    • "Splendid!"
    This would go in at around 0:15
I have one PL NOTE for Chapter 16:
  • At around 1:28 you repeat the line: "But why shouldn't there be a mutual exchange of schools?"
By the way Victoria, Ursula does not have any lines inside of Chapter 15 so Dorotli read Chapter 12 instead. Would the filename be a problem?

~ The Countess
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Post by brownrottger »

Hi, I don't see any lines for Miss Webb in Chapter 11.
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