[FULL][DR] A Fourth Form Friendship by Angela Brazil - rap
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Thank you for the feedback, M!
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
It sounds perfectly natural. Chapter 2 is now PL OK.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑March 25th, 2024, 1:27 pm Thank you for the feedback, M!
I have uploaded Chapter 2, I used a "without" from another sentence, hopefully it sounds smooth enough.
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I've finally finished the narrator chapter 6.
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Chapter 7 is in too!
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Well done! Just a few PL notes:
0:42 missing line "cried the purser, coming round at this critical moment to collect the fares, and holding out his hand in anticipation."
4:29 phrase sounds cut-off "where the cliffs were of a different geological formation"
5:15 word substitution "carry some specimens back to the Grange" read as species.
6:07 phrase sounds cut-off "and investigating such a number of species, that the other girls began"
13:50 missing line "she cried, shaking them eagerly."
missing "End of Chapter 6"
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PL notes:
this is optional, at 7:43 the word "sang-froid" has French roots and it's best pronounced as "san-frwa"
at 15:07, missing "English communication"
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Chapter 6 has been updated.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑March 29th, 2024, 4:27 amWell done! Just a few PL notes:
0:42 missing line "cried the purser, coming round at this critical moment to collect the fares, and holding out his hand in anticipation."
4:29 phrase sounds cut-off "where the cliffs were of a different geological formation"
5:15 word substitution "carry some specimens back to the Grange" read as species.
6:07 phrase sounds cut-off "and investigating such a number of species, that the other girls began"
13:50 missing line "she cried, shaking them eagerly."
missing "End of Chapter 6"
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I've fixed chapter 7. Chapter 8 is in the MW.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑April 10th, 2024, 4:13 pmPL notes:
this is optional, at 7:43 the word "sang-froid" has French roots and it's best pronounced as "san-frwa"
at 15:07, missing "English communication"
Thanks,
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Chapter 6 and 7: Check OK!
For Chapter 8, PL notes:
Include "Chapter 8, Amateur Theatricals" just after the disclaimer at 0:12
missing "run her letter to Aldred" at current 0:57
missing at current 8:28 "remonstrated Aldred." and "retorted Lorna, rather resentful of so much interference."
For Chapter 8, PL notes:
Include "Chapter 8, Amateur Theatricals" just after the disclaimer at 0:12
missing "run her letter to Aldred" at current 0:57
missing at current 8:28 "remonstrated Aldred." and "retorted Lorna, rather resentful of so much interference."
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For Mabel Farrington, Chapter 8, the sentence after 1:29 is not very clear, I would recommend re-recording it: "There are eight characters, so get eight slips of paper, Dora, and we'll write one on each."
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I have just uploaded final files for Chapters 6 and 7 in the Magic Window.
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You're fast!Rapunzelina wrote: ↑May 8th, 2024, 2:48 pm I have just uploaded final files for Chapters 6 and 7 in the Magic Window.
Sorry about the delay on my part. I'll try to get more chapters out each day (hopefully).
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I can be fast when I'm focused. But then there can be so many distractions in here, so many interesting projects
Revisiting Chapter 4, it's just missing one line, which you've assigned to Agnes. I think the reader is norahnelson. Have you let her know?
Revisiting Chapter 4, it's just missing one line, which you've assigned to Agnes. I think the reader is norahnelson. Have you let her know?
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Yes, I pmed her about it.Rapunzelina wrote: ↑May 9th, 2024, 3:01 pm I can be fast when I'm focused. But then there can be so many distractions in here, so many interesting projects
Revisiting Chapter 4, it's just missing one line, which you've assigned to Agnes. I think the reader is norahnelson. Have you let her know?