(historical fiction) On the red staircase, by Mary Imlay Taylor - lt

ToniaManley · Post by **ToniaManley** » October 29th, 2023, 2:24 pm

May I read chapter 4 “the shadows on the wall”?

Tonia M.

Post by **Lynnet** » October 29th, 2023, 2:31 pm

ToniaManley wrote: ↑October 29th, 2023, 2:24 pm May I read chapter 4 “the shadows on the wall”?

Tonia M.

Absolutely

ToniaManley · Post by **ToniaManley** » November 2nd, 2023, 3:24 am

Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor_128kb.mp3

11:26

Very Respectfully,

Tonia M.

Post by **Lynnet** » November 2nd, 2023, 5:48 am

ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 2nd, 2023, 3:24 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor_128kb.mp3

11:26

Very Respectfully,

Tonia M.

Thank you

vviera · Post by **vviera** » November 2nd, 2023, 5:11 pm

ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 2nd, 2023, 3:24 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor_128kb.mp3

11:26

Very Respectfully,

Tonia M.

Hi, Tonia. Here are your notes:
Beginning silence should be .5-1 second. It’s currently 5 seconds.
End silence should be 5 seconds. It’s currently 2 seconds.

In these two sentences, you skip from “hideous” to “look in”
It was a hideous incongruity. I walked along cautiously, observing the house on the side where I was; the windows were too high from the ground for me to look in
p. 50

Post by **Lynnet** » November 13th, 2023, 9:29 am

Chapter 6 is ready for PL.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » November 13th, 2023, 11:20 am

Lynnet wrote: ↑November 13th, 2023, 9:29 am Chapter 6 is ready for PL.

PL OK

Cbteddy · Post by **Cbteddy** » November 23rd, 2023, 10:13 pm

May I please have section 7?

Post by **Lynnet** » November 24th, 2023, 2:23 am

Cbteddy wrote: ↑November 23rd, 2023, 10:13 pm May I please have section 7?

Absolutely

Post by **Lynnet** » November 24th, 2023, 7:18 am

Chapter 29 is ready for PL.

ToniaManley · Post by **ToniaManley** » November 25th, 2023, 1:05 am

Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor-128kb.mp3

11:35

Very Respectfully,

Tonia Manley

Post by **Lynnet** » November 25th, 2023, 8:12 am

ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 1:05 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor-128kb.mp3

11:35

Very Respectfully,

Tonia Manley

Thank you. Please note the file name: it should be an underscore between the author name and 128kb.

vviera · Post by **vviera** » November 25th, 2023, 11:15 am

ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 1:05 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor-128kb.mp3

11:35

Very Respectfully,

Tonia Manley

Hi Tonia - Good reading. As Lynne has noted, your file name needs one small correction. Please change the file name and reupload, pasting the new URL here again.
Thanks!

Post by **Lynnet** » November 25th, 2023, 11:53 am

vviera wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 11:15 am
ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 1:05 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor-128kb.mp3

11:35

Very Respectfully,

Tonia Manley
Hi Tonia - Good reading. As Lynne has noted, your file name needs one small correction. Please change the file name and reupload, pasting the new URL here again.
Thanks!

Please note the file name doesn’t need to be changed unless there are other edits

vviera · Post by **vviera** » November 25th, 2023, 12:07 pm

ToniaManley wrote: ↑November 25th, 2023, 1:05 am Chapter 4 The Shadows on the Wall

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_04_taylor-128kb.mp3

11:35

Very Respectfully,

Tonia Manley

Marked PL OK per Lynne. Thank you.