(historical fiction) On the red staircase, by Mary Imlay Taylor - lt

vviera · Post by **vviera** » February 25th, 2024, 10:03 pm

Lynnet wrote: ↑February 25th, 2024, 5:37 pm
vviera wrote: ↑February 25th, 2024, 12:58 pm Hi there - I've developed eye strain from so many hours of PL! I'm withdrawing from a few projects to reduce my load. Please remove me from this one.
Oh no! Hope it’s short-lived before you go into withdrawal!

Well, I'm not giving it all up! Just trimming the amount I do for awhile.

ruthruby · Post by **ruthruby** » March 12th, 2024, 9:21 am

Hello,

May I read chapter 12, please?

Thank you

Ruth

Post by **Lynnet** » March 12th, 2024, 9:42 am

ruthruby wrote: ↑March 12th, 2024, 9:21 am Hello,

May I read chapter 12, please?

Thank you

Ruth

Sure!

ruthruby · Post by **ruthruby** » March 18th, 2024, 9:22 am

Hello

Here is chapter 12. 13 mins 41 secs

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_12_taylor_128kb.mp3

I enjoyed reading this. I am new so I am happy to receive any feedback, and happy to re-record or make any changes.

Many thanks

Ruth

Post by **Lynnet** » March 18th, 2024, 9:37 am

ruthruby wrote: ↑March 18th, 2024, 9:22 am Hello

Here is chapter 12. 13 mins 41 secs

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_12_taylor_128kb.mp3

I enjoyed reading this. I am new so I am happy to receive any feedback, and happy to re-record or make any changes.

Many thanks

Ruth

Thank you.
I will listen either later today or tomorrow morning. It is very rare to need a chapter to be re-recorded. Most can be edited or otherwise salvaged. Only ever do changes that are asked for, or you create busy work for everyone.

Post by **Lynnet** » March 18th, 2024, 3:01 pm

Chapter 12

~3:45 I hear “the officers will be added to go to their country places"should be “the officers will be allowed to go to their country places"
~7:12 stumble "among the spectators of... of the justice"

There is no need to do anything about this, but throughout I was hearing a noise, like mic bumps, or as if you were kicking the table. This isn't a serious issue, but something you should be aware of and try to prevent in future recordings.
Please do the two edits listed above (please ask if you're not sure how) and re-upload with the same file name. There is no need to re-record the whole section

ruthruby · Post by **ruthruby** » March 19th, 2024, 9:20 am

https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_12_taylor_128kb.mp3

Hello

Thank you for proof-listening my chapter and for your PL notes.
I have made the two edits. Please see above corrected file.
I will do some work to try to improve my acoustics, thank you for letting me know. I am trying to soften the surrounding surfaces etc.

Best wishes

Ruth

Post by **Lynnet** » March 19th, 2024, 3:47 pm

ruthruby wrote: ↑March 19th, 2024, 9:20 am https://librivox.org/uploads/lynnet/ontheredstaircase_12_taylor_128kb.mp3

Hello

Thank you for proof-listening my chapter and for your PL notes.
I have made the two edits. Please see above corrected file.
I will do some work to try to improve my acoustics, thank you for letting me know. I am trying to soften the surrounding surfaces etc.

Best wishes

Ruth

Thank you. Soft furnishings usually help… and I even heard of someone using a pile of coats.

Post by **Lynnet** » March 20th, 2024, 8:06 am

Chapter 12 PL OK

Perfect edits

ruthruby · Post by **ruthruby** » March 20th, 2024, 10:34 am

Good to hear, thanks.
Also thanks for the tip re soft furnishings

Cbteddy · Post by **Cbteddy** » April 21st, 2024, 6:35 am

May I have section 11?

Post by **Lynnet** » April 21st, 2024, 8:34 am

Cbteddy wrote: ↑April 21st, 2024, 6:35 am May I have section 11?

Absolutely

ruthruby · Post by **ruthruby** » April 22nd, 2024, 6:59 am

Hello,

I have been working on my acoustics and I think I have solved my problems. No more mic bumps

May I read chapter 14, please?

Post by **Lynnet** » April 22nd, 2024, 8:38 am

ruthruby wrote: ↑April 22nd, 2024, 6:59 am Hello,

I have been working on my acoustics and I think I have solved my problems. No more mic bumps
May I read chapter 14, please?

Certainly

Post by **brownrottger** » April 23rd, 2024, 3:45 pm

I would like to DPL is you still need one.
Christine