Couple of notes for Chapter 2:
- The first post provides information about the intro for the characters and for the narrator, but not for the chapters. I hear the longer intro for the first chapter, but the abbreviated version for Chapter 2. Is that ok? And will subsequent chapters also have the abbreviated intro? (As you may be able to tell, this is my first DR PL. Have done lots of other PLing, and some parts-PLing, but never finished product.)
- At 1:56, I hear “In a whirlwind of ejaculation and unanswerable interrogation they trampled the clothes case, the paint-box, the easel, and dragged him toward the house.” But the original reads ““In a whirlwind of ejaculation and unanswerable interrogation they grappled the clothes case,…” I think this has rather a different meaning; if they trampled it presumably they’d have left it behind, but if they grapple it, they’re dragging it, along with him, up to the house. I think this could use fixing.
Cheers,