~(Editing) [DR] The Third Violet by Stephen Crane - thw

DrSpoke · Post by **DrSpoke** » August 9th, 2023, 1:35 pm

ChuckW wrote: ↑August 9th, 2023, 11:06 am If possible, would you mind being the DPL for the finished files? I've got a few already edited together, but they've gone unlistened since I uploaded them. Thank you so much.

It's my first time PLing DR files; not sure about what to point out. General remark, you don’t use the full intro at the beginning of the files.
The only important note is the very last.

Chapter III

@ 01:29 - 3rd paragraph [I mention this, but I wouldn’t touch it]
text has: and sundry little white clouds
audio has: and sundry little clouds

Chapter IV
@ 03:37
text: Hawker glinted his eyes at his friend. "You've got a deuced open way of speaking," he observed.
audio missing [but not necessary]: he observed.

Chapter VIII
@06:46
text: The girl was looking away somewhere with a mystic, shining grace.
audio: The girl was looking away somewhere with a mystic, shining glance.

Chapter XXVIII
@00:51
text: Hi!" he cried, "there is Lucian Pontiac
audio missing [but not necessary]: he cried

@03:07
text: "My girl?" said Hawker.
audio repetition of: said Hawker.

CHAPERS 6 and 9 PL OK!

GREAT job!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » August 9th, 2023, 2:48 pm

DrSpoke wrote: ↑August 9th, 2023, 1:35 pm
ChuckW wrote: ↑August 9th, 2023, 11:06 am If possible, would you mind being the DPL for the finished files? I've got a few already edited together, but they've gone unlistened since I uploaded them. Thank you so much.
It's my first time PLing DR files; not sure about what to point out. General remark, you don’t use the full intro at the beginning of the files.
The only important note is the very last.

Chapter III

@ 01:29 - 3rd paragraph [I mention this, but I wouldn’t touch it]
text has: and sundry little white clouds
audio has: and sundry little clouds

Chapter IV
@ 03:37
text: Hawker glinted his eyes at his friend. "You've got a deuced open way of speaking," he observed.
audio missing [but not necessary]: he observed.

Chapter VIII
@06:46
text: The girl was looking away somewhere with a mystic, shining grace.
audio: The girl was looking away somewhere with a mystic, shining glance.

Chapter XXVIII
@00:51
text: Hi!" he cried, "there is Lucian Pontiac
audio missing [but not necessary]: he cried

@03:07
text: "My girl?" said Hawker.
audio repetition of: said Hawker.

CHAPERS 6 and 9 PL OK!

GREAT job!

This is perfect! Thank you so much!

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » August 14th, 2023, 6:21 am

For what it's worth, I see that Wrinkles ch 25 has not been updated in the MW

ChuckW wrote: ↑June 5th, 2023, 7:12 pm
adrianstephens wrote: ↑May 24th, 2023, 2:06 am
ChuckW wrote: ↑May 19th, 2023, 7:36 pm

That would be wonderful! Thank you!
Hello Chuck, here you are:
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_19.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_20.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_21.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_22.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_23.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_24.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_25.mp3
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_wrinkles_30.mp3

In Ch 25, from 0:34 to 0:48, I've included the stanza that is marked for another reader. I think this belongs to Wrinkles.

Regards,
Adrian
Thanks for catching that error... whoopsie-doodle. No idea how I missed that. These three bohemian characters are hard to keep track of.

Anyway, great job! Almost everything is PL OK with the exception of one line:

24:

0:18 - "Oh, it's just some dream. They gibber at anything." - Missing the second part of this line

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » August 14th, 2023, 11:11 am

hello, may I please be

Younger Worcester Girl (Millicent)

mariechristian · Post by **mariechristian** » August 18th, 2023, 3:33 pm

Gossiper 4
length 0:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_gossiper4_12.mp3

Marie

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » August 19th, 2023, 2:50 am

adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 14th, 2023, 6:21 am For what it's worth, I see that Wrinkles ch 25 has not been updated in the MW

ping?

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 19th, 2023, 2:50 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 14th, 2023, 6:21 am For what it's worth, I see that Wrinkles ch 25 has not been updated in the MW

ping?

It should be updated now. Please let me know if you see otherwise.

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm

mariechristian wrote: ↑August 18th, 2023, 3:33 pm Gossiper 4
length 0:28

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_gossiper4_12.mp3

Marie

Thank you so much! I’ll listen to this tomorrow.

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑August 14th, 2023, 11:11 am hello, may I please be

Younger Worcester Girl (Millicent)

That would be great! Thank you!

adrianstephens · Post by **adrianstephens** » August 20th, 2023, 9:47 pm

ChuckW wrote: ↑August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm
adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 19th, 2023, 2:50 am
adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 14th, 2023, 6:21 am For what it's worth, I see that Wrinkles ch 25 has not been updated in the MW

ping?
It should be updated now. Please let me know if you see otherwise.

Hello Chuck. Section 171 still shows it as assigned to me - or at least that's what I see in my browser and the librivox status page.

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » August 21st, 2023, 3:46 pm

ChuckW wrote: ↑August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm
AgnesRobert wrote: ↑August 14th, 2023, 11:11 am hello, may I please be

Younger Worcester Girl (Millicent)
That would be great! Thank you!

I have a question how old would you say she is likely to be, I can't figure that out

AgnesRobert · Post by **AgnesRobert** » August 28th, 2023, 5:06 pm

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_5.mp3 (1:29)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_10.mp3 (0:26)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_12.mp3 (0:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_14.mp3 (0:11)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_15.mp3 (0:10)and it is doing that thing where it wants me to distort it and make the wave form fill the screen to meet the right amount of decibels which would make it way to loud, which is all to say that this one does not pass but I wanted to not distort it like that for fear it would degrade the quality when you had to inevitably make it much smaller
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_17.mp3 (0:47)

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » September 1st, 2023, 3:48 pm

AgnesRobert wrote: ↑August 28th, 2023, 5:06 pm https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_5.mp3 (1:29)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_10.mp3 (0:26)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_12.mp3 (0:21)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_14.mp3 (0:11)
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_15.mp3 (0:10)and it is doing that thing where it wants me to distort it and make the wave form fill the screen to meet the right amount of decibels which would make it way to loud, which is all to say that this one does not pass but I wanted to not distort it like that for fear it would degrade the quality when you had to inevitably make it much smaller
https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_youngerworchestergirl_17.mp3 (0:47)

Everything sounds perfect on my end... and anything that seems iffy can be fixed in post. PL OK. Thank you so much!

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » September 1st, 2023, 3:49 pm

adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 20th, 2023, 9:47 pm
ChuckW wrote: ↑August 20th, 2023, 4:40 pm
adrianstephens wrote: ↑August 19th, 2023, 2:50 am

ping?
It should be updated now. Please let me know if you see otherwise.
Hello Chuck. Section 171 still shows it as assigned to me - or at least that's what I see in my browser and the librivox status page.

Bizarrely, none of my updates were registering on the MW... but now it seems to have resolved itself. Super strange.

ChuckW · Post by **ChuckW** » September 5th, 2023, 8:45 am

Two more finished chapters:

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_07_crane_128kb.mp3 [9:03]

https://librivox.org/uploads/toddhw/thirdviolet_13_crane_128kb.mp3 [7:11]