[FICTION] The Dark Star by Robert W. Chambers -jo

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Chapter 24 with corrections after PL.

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_24_chambers_128kb.mp3

I'm doing NaNoWriMo, so I can't pick anything up until December, but if there are still chapters then, I'll be back!

PL OK. Thank you! Good luck with NaNoWriMo! You'll be welcome to more chapters if some are still available in December, which it's looking like there will be.

[BritishNickVO]

Hi there

Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please

Nick

[BritishNickVO]

Hi there

Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please

Nick

[Scarbo]

Hi there

Can I take Ch 11 The Breakers, please

Nick

It's all yours! Thank you for claiming!

[BritishNickVO]

Here is Chapter 11

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_11_chambers_128kp.mp3


Length is 18:52

[yoricksskull]

Hello,

I would love to read Chapters 25 and 26.

Thank you.

[Scarbo]

Hello,

I would love to read Chapters 25 and 26.

Thank you.

They're all yours! Thank you for claiming!

[Scarbo]

Thank you for Chapter 11, BritishNickVO! I should have it PL'd by the end of the day.

[Kenilee18]

Hi there!

May I claim sections 34 and 35?

Thank you,
Kendra

[Scarbo]

Hi there!

May I claim sections 34 and 35?

Thank you,
Kendra

Certainly! Thank you for claiming!

[Scarbo]

Here is Chapter 11

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_11_chambers_128kp.mp3


Length is 18:52

Thanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed your expressive reading style. I have just a few notes:

- At 3:15, after "had he been free he would have married her," could you include the line "When he got his freedom he would insist on another ceremony"?
- At 4:52, "only by the light touch of some steady, patient hand that understood," you say "only by the light touch of some steady hand that understood"
- At 8:40, "half dead, held fast by the gathering crowd," I hear "half dead, half fast by the gathering crowd"
- At 10:28, "alternately confused and dazzled in the patches of darkness and flaring light," you say "alternately confused and dazed in the patches of darkness and flaring light"
- At 14:46, "But he had thrust the fear of strangers deep into her heart," you say "But he had thrust the fear of strangers into her heart"
- At 14:59, "asking the direction of the railroad station from which trains departed for Gayfield," you say "asking the directions of the railroad station from which trains departed for Gayfield"
- At 15:28, "Is it up-state, dearie?" you say "Is it up-state, darling?"
- At 17:33, "Thank you so much for your great kindness," you say "Thank you so much for your kindness"

[Kenilee18]

Hi!

Here is section 34, ready for PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3

31:42

I'll keep an eye out for notes!

Thank you,
Kendra

[Scarbo]

Thank you, Kendra! I should be able to have section 34 PL'd by the end of tomorrow.

[Scarbo]

Hi!

Here is section 34, ready for PL:


https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3

31:42

I'll keep an eye out for notes!

Thank you,
Kendra

Thanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed the characters' accents. I have just a few notes:

- At 8:46, "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palest gold," I hear "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palaced gold"
- At 10:48, "Would you like to have a cat for your lively ménage?" I hear "Would you like to have a cat for your lovely ménage?"

[yoricksskull]

Chapter 25

https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_25_chambers_128kb.mp3

17mm 51ss