Thank you for your notes! Here is a revised section 34:Scarbo wrote: ↑November 15th, 2023, 6:27 pmThanks again for this chapter! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed the characters' accents. I have just a few notes:Kenilee18 wrote: ↑November 14th, 2023, 8:32 am Hi!
Here is section 34, ready for PL:
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3
31:42
I'll keep an eye out for notes!
Thank you,
Kendra
- At 8:46, "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palest gold," I hear "and he looked up and saw the first sunbeam painting a chimney top with palaced gold"
- At 10:48, "Would you like to have a cat for your lively ménage?" I hear "Would you like to have a cat for your lovely ménage?"
https://librivox.org/uploads/knotyouraveragejo/darkstar_34_chambers_128kb.mp3
31:42
Thanks again,
Kendra