Thank you for chapter 13! It's very nicely done, and I enjoyed your expressive reading style. Here are my PL notes:
- At 1:24, "and as though it were
another girl sitting here writing to you," I hear "and as though it were
a little girl sitting here writing to you"
- At 1:35, "
Girls dream many foolish things about the future," you say "
Girl dreams many foolish things about the future"
- At 6:57, "enclosing a
tremulous line from Rue," I hear "enclosing a
tremelious line from Rue"
- At 8:02, "the international lawyers whom I have
put into communication with Judge Gary through the New York representatives of the firm," you say "the international lawyers whom I have
kept into communication with Judge Gary through the New York representatives of the firm"
- At 10:48, after "in which you have forgotten me," could you include the line "Among other things I have been busy growing"?
- At 11:36, "Also, it is very
trying, mon ami," you say "Also, it is very
tiring, mon ami"
- At 11:57, "
Which is wonderful for him," you say "
It is wonderful for him"
- At 14:44, "we have been to the
Louvre," I hear "we have been to the
Lower"
- At 16:35, "and they all are
most beautifully gowned," you say "and they all are
mostly beautifully gowned"
- At 24:40, "One hears a great deal about the embassies here being
hotbeds of political intrigue," I hear "One hears a great deal about the embassies here being
hotheads of political intrigue"
- At 27:07, "already being
moulded by discipline mondaine," I hear "already being
moduled by discipline mondaine"
- At 30:34, "may I now invoke
in you the memory of our very frank and delightful friendship," you say "may I now invoke you the memory of our very frank and delightful friendship"
- At 32:30, "and I shall arrange matters through
a New York bank," I hear "and I shall arrange matters through
your New York bank"
- At 32:49, "Let nobody see it
open," you say "Let nobody see it"
- At 33:01, "what powers of evil they might encourage
if in any way they fall into other hands than the right ones," I hear "what powers of evil they might encourage in any way they fall into other hands than the right ones"
For the time being, I'll need a little more time than usual to PL sections that come in on weekdays. Thanks for your patience.
Sarah