alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 23rd, 2023, 10:51 am
Thanks Inkell, this is also Ready for PL!
I think that between us we have uploaded 8 poems for this project today
alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 25th, 2023, 2:05 am
PL note for section 21:
at 0.35 the text is Have there been breathed... but the Have is missing
Otherwise OK!
alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 23rd, 2023, 10:51 am
Thanks Inkell, this is also Ready for PL!
I think that between us we have uploaded 8 poems for this project today
Inkell wrote: ↑March 23rd, 2023, 4:54 am
So I'm currently working through these poems (here are two more by the way:
34: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poeticalworks_34_halleck_128kb.mp3 (2 mins, 16 secs)
37: https://librivox.org/uploads/kitty/poeticalworks_37_halleck_128kb.mp3 (3 mins, 25 secs))
But on poem 39 I came across a problem, there's a white splodge on the page that blocks the beginning of the last three lines on page 212, you can piece together two of them (AS mine... and TO hers) but the middle one is just _ pressed. Do we have an alternate version where we can see what the missing word is or should I just read it the line beginning with pressed?
PL notes for section 34:
00:18 - I hear "ties his caveat with a curl", text reads "ties his cravat with a curl"
1:10 - I hear "in the first parlor", text says "in the front parlor"
And that is all for today, I have the last one recorded too but it's longer than these and will take more time to edit so you'll have to wait on that one
Thank you very much. These were all great to listen to
there is just one small note for this section:
00:12 - I hear "Am, To ladies eyes a round", the text says "AIR" (as in, the tune for this)
Just one point - it meets the guidelines for stating "End of poem" at the end. But it's not, really, since its just the first 24 sections of the (very long) poem FANNY. Did you want to modify the end for the Fanny sections, maybe to "End of section xx" so it's not confusing to the listener?
Just a couple of PL notes on this one.
00:59 - I hear "and the violent" text says "and the violet"
5:20 - stumble/repeat "The roughest shuns,... the roughest shuns not manhood's"
Section 22 is PL OK.
Just one point - it meets the guidelines for stating "End of poem" at the end. But it's not, really, since its just the first 24 sections of the (very long) poem FANNY. Did you want to modify the end for the Fanny sections, maybe to "End of section xx" so it's not confusing to the listener?
Good point, I will change it to something different but I will think about what is best. I will ask the readers of the other parts of Fanny to do the same when they stake a claim.
The way things are going I may have to read it all myself anyway
Alan the sixth age shifts into the slippered pantaloon with spectacles on nose
alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 25th, 2023, 2:05 am
PL note for section 21:
at 0.35 the text is Have there been breathed... but the Have is missing
Otherwise OK!
kristakz wrote: ↑March 25th, 2023, 1:22 pm
Thank you very much. These were all great to listen to
there is just one small note for this section:
00:12 - I hear "Am, To ladies eyes a round", the text says "AIR" (as in, the tune for this)
Just a couple of PL notes on this one.
00:59 - I hear "and the violent" text says "and the violet"
5:20 - stumble/repeat "The roughest shuns,... the roughest shuns not manhood's"
PL notes for section 34:
00:18 - I hear "ties his caveat with a curl", text reads "ties his cravat with a curl"
1:10 - I hear "in the first parlor", text says "in the front parlor"
Thank you for your PL work, glad you enjoyed the poems despite the errors! At least my favorite one was PL OK haha, I'll make the changes when I can
alanmapstone wrote: ↑March 25th, 2023, 6:56 pm
The way things are going I may have to read it all myself anyway
Are you really struggling for readers that much or do you just want this project to be wrapped up quickly?
