[COMPLETE]: The Unlit Lamp by Elizabeth Sanxay Holding - icequeen

[JustAnotherPage]

I'll get started on it!

Awesome!

[cmhowell]

Here is section 6 (21:15).
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_06_holding_128kb.mp3

As I'm still very new at this, how do I request constructive feedback?

Cathy

[kristakz]

Here is section 6 (21:15).
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_06_holding_128kb.mp3

As I'm still very new at this, how do I request constructive feedback?

Cathy

Hi Cathy,

I think you just did

Basically, PL feedback is limited to specific issues with content that need to be corrected. If you are looking for broader feedback about your technique or some specific aspect, just ask the DPL (that'd be me, in this case, hence my comment). I suppose some might be unwilling, so no guarantees since we are all volunteers, but I'm perfectly happy to provide additional notes if that is what you are asking for. I could do that through a DM if you like, and limit my post here to any issues that definitely need correction (and you can pick & choose from any other comments if you wish to make any changes).

I've queued this up for PL, so should have some feedback for you in the next day or two.

Krista

[cmhowell]

Yes, I’d love all the notes you’d be willing to provide. Please DM me with them. I’m truly not looking for strokes but specific feedback to improve. And you don’t need to limit it to things that are “fixable” in this particular recording. Notes on general style, breath control (of which I have none…), things to work on for the next recording are all welcome. I ultimately want to compare this recording (only my 3rd) to my 100th recording and see a dramatic improvement. Thank you so much!

Here is section 6 (21:15).
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_06_holding_128kb.mp3

As I'm still very new at this, how do I request constructive feedback?

Cathy

Hi Cathy,

I think you just did

Basically, PL feedback is limited to specific issues with content that need to be corrected. If you are looking for broader feedback about your technique or some specific aspect, just ask the DPL (that'd be me, in this case, hence my comment). I suppose some might be unwilling, so no guarantees since we are all volunteers, but I'm perfectly happy to provide additional notes if that is what you are asking for. I could do that through a DM if you like, and limit my post here to any issues that definitely need correction (and you can pick & choose from any other comments if you wish to make any changes).

I've queued this up for PL, so should have some feedback for you in the next day or two.

Krista

[mjgeronimo]

Here is Section 8 (10:55) - Book 1, Chapter VIII. A Year Later.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/theunlitlamp_08_holding_128kb.mp3

Thank you,

Mary Jane

[BrizeCrize]

I'm a little 'late to the party' I see, but for some reason, this title piqued my interest as I scrolled by today, as did the summary, so please sign me up for section 22, if you please.

Thank you,
Brize CRize

[mjgeronimo]

May I claim Section 23, Book 3, Chapter VI. Discords?

Thank you,

Mary Jane

[LesWilLang]

Hello,
I'd like to claim Section 22 and 23: Book 3, Chapters V and VI.
I noticed that the chapters have parts (i, ii, iii). Is everyone saying "part 1", or just "1", or something else, or nothing at all at the beginning of each of these?
Thanks,
Les

[kristakz]

Here is section 6 (21:15).
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_06_holding_128kb.mp3

As I'm still very new at this, how do I request constructive feedback?

Cathy

Section 6 is PL OK

[mjgeronimo]

May I claim Section 23, Book 3, Chapter VI. Discords?

Thank you,

Mary Jane

[JustAnotherPage]

Section 20, done.
Time: 22:56.
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If you're comfortable giving it, I'd really appreciate constructive feedback on my performance, and/or my sound quality, etc.

https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_20_holding_128kb.mp3

[JustAnotherPage]

Hello,
I'd like to claim Section 22 and 23: Book 3, Chapters V and VI.
I noticed that the chapters have parts (i, ii, iii). Is everyone saying "part 1", or just "1", or something else, or nothing at all at the beginning of each of these?
Thanks,
Les

I don't. I only do that if each part is longer than an hour. For each of the sections of the chapter, I just pause a little longer.

[cmhowell]

Here is section 7 (22:45). Please let me know if you have any edits, and I also welcome a DM of constructive criticism. Thanks!
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_07_holding_128kb.mp3

Cathy

[Evenstar]

Here is section 21. I said section 21 at the beginning, I hope that's okay.
https://librivox.org/uploads/icequeen/unlitlamp_21_holding_128_kb.mp3

17 min 1 sec

[LesWilLang]

Hello,
I'd like to claim Section 22 and 23: Book 3, Chapters V and VI.
I noticed that the chapters have parts (i, ii, iii). Is everyone saying "part 1", or just "1", or something else, or nothing at all at the beginning of each of these?
Thanks,
Les

I don't. I only do that if each part is longer than an hour. For each of the sections of the chapter, I just pause a little longer.

ok, thanks!